lost.

[thetrueblood]

I packed my bags to go away, i went outside on a sunny day
and came across a man who warned, "you know not who you are."
I took a sigh and then replied "all i can be is this body and mind--it's the only me i have ever known and it's the me i've come to like"

"just stay right there, just stay with me and i'll show you a new happy-- just stay a night and if it still feels wrong you can catch a bus at morning light"

I took this risk and I stayed around I thought "it's worth a shot. a town's a town"

So morning came and with the sun came growth of life. I looked around and the world seemed bright. I looked at her and said "this feels right."

I found a rose and I called it mine. I thought "how can I keep this fresh for all of time?"

winter came and froze it's petals-- I didn't know what to do.
I heard a voice and it said to me, "this season's ice might take your life if you're not sure who to be"
the windows rattled with the sounds of hail, so i took this chance and I just bailed into a little basement reserved for one-- a place without ice and without any sun"

The storm surpassed and I came out and I knew not who i was.

So I packed my bags to go away-- the sky was overcast and i was in a haze
the remains of the last few days.

I came across a man I warned, "I knew not who I was."

He said "I overanalyze everything that people say and that people do, but I just can't do the same for you"

I argued, "you were there too for every minute. so take a look inside your life and tell me that you did things right"

"silly boy- introspect is black and white."

and with that he sprouted wings and flew away. Tomorrow will be a whole new day.
I wonder then if people change--or just get lost along the way.

[thetrueblood]

any input at all?

[Vedanta]

Good concept, not my favorite style though.