who likes it?

[guns_go_bang]

MOMMY I LOVE YOU

~It’s hard to watch you,
Every day when I come home I hope you are ok,
That you haven’t hurt yourself,
Or even faded away

~I know it’s not your fault,
It’s just hard for me to see,
That I am caring for you…,
While you use to care for me.

~Sometimes I want to cry,
I can see that you do too,
But as long as we stick together,
I know we will make it through.

~I know you don’t want to hear this,
But at least I am speaking the truth,
Sometimes I get mad that you got sick,
So mad I don’t know what to do.

~One day I know,
We will wake up,
And it will just be a dream.

~But there will always be one thing that I know is true,
It will stay with us forever,
Mommy I hope you know that,
I love you.
~by:
Oshian

[guns_go_bang]

wow cant read it let me do it again

MOMMY I LOVE YOU

~It’s hard to watch you,
Everyday when I come home I hope you are ok,
That you haven’t hurt yourself,
Or even faded away

~I know it’s not your fault,
It’s just hard for me to see,
That I am caring for you…,
While you use to care for me.

~Sometimes I want to cry,
I can see that you do too,
But as long as we stick together,
I know we will make it through.

~I know you don’t want to hear this,
But at least I am speaking the truth,
Sometimes I get mad that you got sick,
So mad I don’t know what to do.

~One day I know,
We will wake up,
And it will just be a dream.

~But there will always be one thing that I know is true,
It will stay with us forever,
Mommy I hope you know that,
I love you.
~by:
Oshian Bloom

[SkaBum14]

Best poem I've ever read. Easily.


Edit: read = not read*

[guns_go_bang]

Best poem I've ever read. Easily.


Edit: read = not read*


o thank you it is about my mom (well duh) lol
thanks

[Vanity__Dearest]

i'm simple plan's manager, i was wondering if i could use this for one of their songs.

[SkaBum14]

o thank you it is about my mom (well duh) lol
thanks

No problem. Keep writing. You're going places.

[guns_go_bang]

i'm simple plan's manager, i was wondering if i could use this for one of their songs.


u r????
cool
and no i dont want any one to use it but me......
it would take the meaning away!
SIMPLE PLAN ROCKS

[guns_go_bang]

No problem. Keep writing. You're going places.


ok i promas lol

[SkaBum14]

ok i promas lol

Awesome. Just remember me when you're a rich and famous poet.

[Vanity__Dearest]

u r????
cool
and no i dont want any one to use it but me......
it would take the meaning away!
SIMPLE PLAN ROCKSyeah i am...u sure u don't wanna rethink this? alot of money in it for ya.

[SLADE775]

Um.....Lyrics/poetry thread plz.

[guns_go_bang]

Um.....Lyrics/poetry thread plz.

sry

[punkpixie]

Oh God. I know I say this alot where this person is concerned but I think I just threw up in my mouth a little bit. It was so great.

[swirlofhues]

inspirational. i love the transition from the 4th to 5th stanza.

[Vanity__Dearest]

I Want Candy

Dun Dun Dun Dun Dun Dun


I Want Candy.

[Rebs]

I cried.

[punkpixie]

I cried.

Because of all the emotion?

[Rebs]

Because of all the emotion?
Yes.

[punkpixie]

Awesome.

[guns_go_bang]

yeah i am...u sure u don't wanna rethink this? alot of money in it for ya.

ok ok i give in!

[guns_go_bang]

wow every one likes it...yah thank you

[Vanity__Dearest]

ok ok i give in!good good. i'll send you the contracts to sign, and pierre should be singing it on their next cd.

[last light]

words cant express how that poem made me feel inside.

[guns_go_bang]

words cant express how that poem made me feel inside.



is that a good thing???

[guns_go_bang]

good good. i'll send you the contracts to sign, and pierre should be singing it on their next cd.

ok sounds good!

[last light]

is that a good thing???

oh, its good...brightens my day

[wyverna]

Wow. That just... wow. I guess it's unbelievable.

[Crocodile Logic]

wow every one likes it...yah thank you
how could they not? it touched me in places i didn't know a poem could touch.

[guns_go_bang]

oo thank you

[Greg]

oo thank you
how are you today?

[last light]

this poem makes me want to go back to age 10 and become bi, its that good.

[guns_go_bang]

this poem makes me want to go back to age 10 and become bi, its that good.


har ha har uer funny

[wyverna]

har ha har uer funny

*you're

or evern just 'ur' would be good

[Tristan Needler]

have we figured out who this really is yet?

[last light]

have we figured out who this really is yet?

haha i was thinking the same thing

[allelish]

wow every one likes it...yah thank you
I didn't. It was the worst thing i've ever read. It was so terrible, i didn't even read it. The joke is over...you are horseshit.

[mps]

good good. i'll send you the contracts to sign, and pierre should be singing it on their next cd.

Think you could send me Pierre's autograph and one of his testicles?

[Adeniz19]

wow cant read it let me do it againnext time just edit the first post

[Vanity__Dearest]

Think you could send me Pierre's autograph and one of his testicles?i'll send you both, actually. he adores me.

[mat1419]

i'm stunned

[mps]

i'll send you both, actually. he adores me.

OmG!!1111!!!32@##@

[FrancesdaMute]

*you're

or evern just 'ur' would be good

hahahahhaha

[guns_go_bang]

o u r nice!