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YoungNastyMan
12/10/05, 12:06 PM
Down the backstreets
Through the back alleys
Beyond the beer bottles
And past the piss puddles...

The echoing sounds
of storming feet against
the ground
The luminous jackets move in
Baton in hand
There fast but not fast enough

One's fucked
the other has done a runner
He's dived into a derelict house
Should have been boarded up
but it would have fallen down

If walls could talk
this house would be screaming
If walls could hurt
this house would be bleeding


Searching for a missing man
We're all gone
but this one's damned

They find him
They fight him
He knows he's gone lose
but he wants to go another round

If walls could talk
this house would be screaming
If walls could hurt
this house would be bleeding

YoungNastyMan
12/11/05, 04:31 AM
bump

lovely864md
12/11/05, 08:07 PM
hmm. idk. others would probably like it better than me, but I'm not crazy about it.

a speedo model
12/12/05, 07:58 AM
it's good, just not really my thing. but still well-written, keep it up.

YoungNastyMan
02/06/06, 01:59 AM
bump