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SeeYouSeptember
04/24/09, 08:01 PM
They all say hindsight is 20/20 but I wouldn't put my money on it.
Even if I won this bet I would lose myself because I doubted it.
We see each other now and then.
Or is it me and I'm looking for you.
Opposite corner I stare at you and our mutual friends.

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Because, friendships don't always last.

Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

We once ruled, we ruled the mountains.
The hike so long and steep, I fell back to the bottom.
Where I would find someone else to hold my hand and walk me back to the top.
Hopefully, they won't let go, like you did when I needed you the most.
Across the mountains I'll see you again.
Remembering all the things we did as friends.
On the tops, I try to spot you there.
When I see you my jaw drops, now I'll have to start again.

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Because, friendships don't always last.

Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.
Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

I run to the ocean side and to the mountain tops
But the thought of you follows me there
I run to the ocean side and to the mountain tops
But the thought of you follows me there

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Times have changed and so have you.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Life this week has been hell.
Friendships don't always last.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

SeeYouSeptember
04/25/09, 04:42 PM
Bump, criticism is needed for anyone to improve.

fishingthe_sky
04/26/09, 09:19 PM
Honestly, this was pretty boring to read. You're not saying anything that hasn't been said before in the way that you are saying it here. The repetition at the end doesn't help, either, but only amplifies its unoriginality. The most interesting thing going on here is the title.