I Hear God Likes His Apples

[Apollo II]

Okay here is one of my poems.Please comment on it.Sorry to any religious people who might be offended by it.


I hear God likes His apples


I scream so i can be heard,
I whisper so i cannot,
hear me out,
I'm whispering, ''I never believed,''
I'm shouting, ''Help me so called God because i need you now more than ever,''
oh how great are you so called creator,
oh how great it is indeed,
that we've become what we have been taught to despise,
and how great it feels to know it,
damn that bastard Adam,
hell,i would have eaten every apple on that tree,
''hello mr.snake what a great day to eat forbidden fruit''
''yes,what a great day to destroy the future of this earth''
silly man,snakes don't talk.

[Apollo II]

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[rockluvr]

haha! thats like, gai but still really funny <3 lily <3

[Apollo II]

haha! thats like, gai but still really funny <3 lily <3



Hahaha. You think i'll take your opinion seriously?

[a speedo model]

not bad, i enjoyed it. mostly.

[ArTkY_]

Didn't care for it. It seemed offensive just for the sake of being offensive.

[Apollo II]

Didn't care for it. It seemed offensive just for the sake of being offensive.

Yeah i see how it might seem that way.

[Boring Pop Song]

i dunno. i didn't feel any substance. sorry

[TheObserver]

I'm a little sick of the phrase "so called God" because it seems anyone writing a anti-religion piece uses it. this poem is overly simple and doesnt send any message besides God is bad