Mando
04/27/09, 10:09 PM
NOTE:
I have not been on Absolute punk in a long while, I would think over a year or two, even.
So I don't know if anyone's put a hip hop song up.
Well I took the Instrumental from Young Skeezy's song Trap Star.
It can be found here: [http://www.playlist.com/playlist/16072910859]
I'm very satisfied with this song. And I had fun making it colourful. :P
"SHE LIKES ME"
T.R.A.P. S.T.A.R.
I'LL TAKE YOUR SOUL HOSTAGE IF YOU COME IN THROUGH MY BACKYARD.
WE'RE STAYIN' UP LATE, MY GIRL SHE HAS ALL EIGHT CARDS,
BUT IN SO FAR, THIS GIRL'S ECCENTRIC AND BIZARRE. IT'S HARD.
FAR SIDED WIZARD OF THE ARTS,
SO CONCERNED WITH THE ALIGNMENT OF MY JUPITER AND MARS
FAVORITE NIGHTFLIX INCLUDE ELECTRIC VIEWINGS OF THE STARS.
NOW MY DRIVE TO MANIFEST CONFIRMED I HAVEN'T DRIVEN VERY FAR.
CALL FOR A SYMPHONY BEHIND ME,
THINKING BACK WOULD JUST REMIND ME,
IF ONLY JUSTICE JUST HAD BETTER TIMING.
MY LOSS FOR WORDS EQUALS ME LOST SIGNING
YELLOW-STONED TO THIS KID'S MOM SMILING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
IF YOU REALLY CAN HEAR ME ALL THE WAY OVER THERE.
P.I.S.C.E.S.
SMOKING ONLY BEST;
UNDERSTAND CHANGING EMOTIONS FROM THIS WORLD AND THE NEXT.
MUTABLE 'CAUSE THIS OCEAN THIRSTS ON THIS EARTH FOR THE WET.
I WANT A TRUE-BLUE FISH, I ASK, " HOW MANY DID YOU CATCH?"
MINE'S ONLY TRUE-BLUE-ISH, BUT SHE SURE BEATS ALL THE REST.
I GOT A TRUE-BLUE-BITCH, BUT SHE DOESN'T LIKE TO FETCH.
THINK OF A LINE I HAVE TO PITCH,
"A KISS FROM YOU WOULD GET ME HIGHER, I GUESS."
WAIT FOR SOME EMPATHY TO FIND ME,
MORE IN DEPTH THEN BELOVED BOOK BINDING.
TO ENTER MY FEELINGS: HIDDEN MACHINE DIVING
GET TO MY CEILING; FORBIDDEN MARINE CLIMBING:
LOOK AT THE SEA SHINING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT THIS EARTH SO NOW I SEIZE IT 'TIL IT'S FAIR.
MOTHER E.A.R.T.H.
FOR TERRA FIRMA'S SAKE,
KEEP THE GROUND SOUND; THIS TOWN ISN'T READY FOR A QUAKE
KEEP THE SOUND DOWN; I DON'T FEEL READY FOR AWAKE.
HOUSE DOWN NOW? OR IS IT STILL BURNING FROM THE BAKE?
BE HERE NOW TAO, WE PUT BEHIND ALL PAST MISTAKES.
PRINCIPLE TAO, WOW, STILL WATCHED YOU BURNING AT THE STAKE
"RELEASE THE HOUNDS, NOW." MY EARTH, THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY.
NOW THE EARTH'S LEAVES BLOW BY ME
IT GETS MUCH WORSE THEN NOT FINDING.
LIKE WHEN THE FIRST FRIEND'S STILL THERE REMINDING.
DEVIL TOWN THEFT, AND THEY'RE STILL BLINDING,
IF ONLY JUSTICE JUST HAD BETTER TIMING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT MY SCALE BABIES MOVING FROM THE EARTH TO THE AIR.
YEAH, SCALE BABIES REALLY KNOW HOW TO LEVEL IT
MY FRIEND WHO HAD A WAY, IS SO LEVELED AND BENEVOLENT.
KIND ENOUGH TO GIVE NO ONE BETTER,
SO LITTLE HAVE-A-WAY COUNT DOWN EACH LETTER:
F.A.M.I.N.E
LOOKS LIKE IT'S ALL YOURS TO ME.
I NOTICE THERE ARE THINGS THAT WE BOTH SEE
SO IF YOU'RE EVER PLAN TRIPS DOWN TOWARD THE SEA
TO NO DEGREE WOULD WE NOT MEET, GUARANTEE.
SEPARATE LIKE THE PHARISEES
WHEN I REFLECT ON MY LIFE I REALLY THINK I'LL CHERISH THESE
MOMENTS IN RIGHT TIME, LIKE MY BODY'S PERISHING.
NOW YOUR TRACK'S EMBARRASSING,
.... need moar
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT MY OWN SELF MORE THEN I CARE ABOUT THEIRS.
Anyone have any input?
I don't like the last two lines, I fit them in so I could ask for feedback.
I have not been on Absolute punk in a long while, I would think over a year or two, even.
So I don't know if anyone's put a hip hop song up.
Well I took the Instrumental from Young Skeezy's song Trap Star.
It can be found here: [http://www.playlist.com/playlist/16072910859]
I'm very satisfied with this song. And I had fun making it colourful. :P
"SHE LIKES ME"
T.R.A.P. S.T.A.R.
I'LL TAKE YOUR SOUL HOSTAGE IF YOU COME IN THROUGH MY BACKYARD.
WE'RE STAYIN' UP LATE, MY GIRL SHE HAS ALL EIGHT CARDS,
BUT IN SO FAR, THIS GIRL'S ECCENTRIC AND BIZARRE. IT'S HARD.
FAR SIDED WIZARD OF THE ARTS,
SO CONCERNED WITH THE ALIGNMENT OF MY JUPITER AND MARS
FAVORITE NIGHTFLIX INCLUDE ELECTRIC VIEWINGS OF THE STARS.
NOW MY DRIVE TO MANIFEST CONFIRMED I HAVEN'T DRIVEN VERY FAR.
CALL FOR A SYMPHONY BEHIND ME,
THINKING BACK WOULD JUST REMIND ME,
IF ONLY JUSTICE JUST HAD BETTER TIMING.
MY LOSS FOR WORDS EQUALS ME LOST SIGNING
YELLOW-STONED TO THIS KID'S MOM SMILING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
IF YOU REALLY CAN HEAR ME ALL THE WAY OVER THERE.
P.I.S.C.E.S.
SMOKING ONLY BEST;
UNDERSTAND CHANGING EMOTIONS FROM THIS WORLD AND THE NEXT.
MUTABLE 'CAUSE THIS OCEAN THIRSTS ON THIS EARTH FOR THE WET.
I WANT A TRUE-BLUE FISH, I ASK, " HOW MANY DID YOU CATCH?"
MINE'S ONLY TRUE-BLUE-ISH, BUT SHE SURE BEATS ALL THE REST.
I GOT A TRUE-BLUE-BITCH, BUT SHE DOESN'T LIKE TO FETCH.
THINK OF A LINE I HAVE TO PITCH,
"A KISS FROM YOU WOULD GET ME HIGHER, I GUESS."
WAIT FOR SOME EMPATHY TO FIND ME,
MORE IN DEPTH THEN BELOVED BOOK BINDING.
TO ENTER MY FEELINGS: HIDDEN MACHINE DIVING
GET TO MY CEILING; FORBIDDEN MARINE CLIMBING:
LOOK AT THE SEA SHINING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT THIS EARTH SO NOW I SEIZE IT 'TIL IT'S FAIR.
MOTHER E.A.R.T.H.
FOR TERRA FIRMA'S SAKE,
KEEP THE GROUND SOUND; THIS TOWN ISN'T READY FOR A QUAKE
KEEP THE SOUND DOWN; I DON'T FEEL READY FOR AWAKE.
HOUSE DOWN NOW? OR IS IT STILL BURNING FROM THE BAKE?
BE HERE NOW TAO, WE PUT BEHIND ALL PAST MISTAKES.
PRINCIPLE TAO, WOW, STILL WATCHED YOU BURNING AT THE STAKE
"RELEASE THE HOUNDS, NOW." MY EARTH, THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY.
NOW THE EARTH'S LEAVES BLOW BY ME
IT GETS MUCH WORSE THEN NOT FINDING.
LIKE WHEN THE FIRST FRIEND'S STILL THERE REMINDING.
DEVIL TOWN THEFT, AND THEY'RE STILL BLINDING,
IF ONLY JUSTICE JUST HAD BETTER TIMING.
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT MY SCALE BABIES MOVING FROM THE EARTH TO THE AIR.
YEAH, SCALE BABIES REALLY KNOW HOW TO LEVEL IT
MY FRIEND WHO HAD A WAY, IS SO LEVELED AND BENEVOLENT.
KIND ENOUGH TO GIVE NO ONE BETTER,
SO LITTLE HAVE-A-WAY COUNT DOWN EACH LETTER:
F.A.M.I.N.E
LOOKS LIKE IT'S ALL YOURS TO ME.
I NOTICE THERE ARE THINGS THAT WE BOTH SEE
SO IF YOU'RE EVER PLAN TRIPS DOWN TOWARD THE SEA
TO NO DEGREE WOULD WE NOT MEET, GUARANTEE.
SEPARATE LIKE THE PHARISEES
WHEN I REFLECT ON MY LIFE I REALLY THINK I'LL CHERISH THESE
MOMENTS IN RIGHT TIME, LIKE MY BODY'S PERISHING.
NOW YOUR TRACK'S EMBARRASSING,
.... need moar
I'M REALLY NOT ANYWHERE, BUT I ALWAYS WANT TO GO SOMEWHERE.
UNTIL I LEARNED TO BE RIGHT HERE NOW TO REALIZE HOW I REALLY CARE
ABOUT MY OWN SELF MORE THEN I CARE ABOUT THEIRS.
Anyone have any input?
I don't like the last two lines, I fit them in so I could ask for feedback.