Big brother

[YoungNastyMan]

My friend he got pissed at the iron fist
He took a crowbar to the cameras
Sprayed his messege on every wall
Big Brother is watching you
Big Brother is watching us one and all

he fought the invasion of his privacy
Fought back the government
All he did was destroy property
It was all a dumbass stunt

We're secure beneath the watchful eyes
Can you feel them burning the back of your neck?
Can you feel them burning?
Can you feel them?

Big brother is watching you
be it infilitration
or intimidation
Big brother is watching you

1984 is coming for sure
Inch by inch and day by day
The spying machines are moving in
with black domes on every ceiling
In our windows they are peering

Big brother is watching you
be it infilitration
or intimidation
Big brother is watching you

[ArTkY_]

Nice job.

[Boring Pop Song]

it's alright, i really like the idea. work on the delivery more and it could be awesome. keep it up

[de la sympathie]

i don't know about this. it didn't really flow, but it was alright.

[extatic reality]

i like the idea for the song.. but as people said before attempt to connect it better and make it flow more..

[YoungNastyMan]

Thanks, I've made a few changes

[rockluvr]

really what it needs is a few different words here and there to help it flow, i like it though, i understand the point of it. for once being a blonde isnt affecting me! lol, i really am blonde but that doesnt make me stupid, lol <3 lily <3

[theMATEOlife]

this has been done before, and better. the statement you're trying to make is important, but shadowing it in "big brother" and 1984 terms seems like a cop out in terms of finding a direction to go in.

not bad all in all though.

[YoungNastyMan]

bump

[GoWaitInTheCar]

this has been done before, and better. the statement you're trying to make is important, but shadowing it in "big brother" and 1984 terms seems like a cop out in terms of finding a direction to go in.

not bad all in all though.

This is pretty much what I was thinking.

7/10