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alyricman
04/29/09, 09:57 AM
Please comment my lyric. If you see any mistake please tell me. I need your suggestions and advices.

We all have two eyes
Is it essential what the colour is?
We’re still waiting for someone wise
To say that we are all one of a kind

Is it too late or too early now
To lend a hand to each other?
Even if all we know how
We don’t do it, don’t even try it

What is it that all we have
What we carry when we go west
Is it soul or nothing or something else
Please give me some suggest

(Chorus)
What we can do
What we can do
To make peace and something new
We’re still waiting for new and better view

One man is not enough to sing:
‘’Give peace a chance’’
If he plays alone on a six-string
He needs help with drums and bass

We stand on the edge of time
While this world has enough space
Even if there is enough space for all of us
We can’t recognize and feel this grace

(Chorus)
What we can do
What we can do
For peace and something new
We’re still waiting for a new and better view
So many times
And so much more
Do we search for love or war?
We must know what we are looking for

(Bridge)
Come to know this world again
Come to know a world without pain
Leave everything that is wrong
Leave everything wrong along the way
Surly we will see that some day

(Chorus)
What we can do
What we can do
For something better on this world
Who can show us what is better and new
So many times
And so much more
We tried to find peaceful shore
Where we will go from here through holy door
In our heart
And in our soul
All we have same goal
But why are we always out of control
All we can do
We all can do
Something better for our only one world
Love must be the only hope in the world
And peace too

fishingthe_sky
05/03/09, 07:44 AM
Well, first of all, your title should have a question mark, not an exclamation point. Secondly, you're up against some stiff competition with a song like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jcrwu6WGoMs

The Personist
05/03/09, 08:22 AM
I love you, fishy.