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Katie 555
01/01/06, 08:29 PM
alone in the dark now with no hint of light
no sound comes out though i scream with all my might
alone in the dark i stay but not afraid
here i lay alone in the dark
on my last day
hey pplz this is ma first poem so hate it or like it....meh
Stu-Stu-Stutter
01/01/06, 10:02 PM
It sounds like any other poem.
There's nothing special about it.
It sucks, basically.
theMATEOlife
01/02/06, 12:38 AM
you're very emo. that will help you stand out against absolutely no one.
punkpixie
01/02/06, 07:23 AM
It's a fucking good job you're alone, no-one is going to hang around with you when you write shit like that.
God damn, we're back to a few months ago when nothing but shit was being posted.
de la sympathie
01/02/06, 02:12 PM
*emo tear*
Nightlight run out of batteries, then? Just go crawl into Mommy's bed, she'll protect you from the big bad dark.
preppyak
01/02/06, 04:19 PM
*emo tear*
Nightlight run out of batteries, then? Just go crawl into Mommy's bed, she'll protect you from the big bad dark.
hahaha
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