She's Gone For Good - Robin Gignac

[twisted.demon]

MORE LYRICS! Please comment! (: (actually it's more like poetry)



I know i got inside your head,
I know i make you wish i'm dead,
your veins are pumping harder every second,
I knwo that i'm not going to heaven,

I'm not stupid, i know what's in your mind,
I'm not god, but i know it's freedom you'd like to find,
you clench your hands more every day,
I'm not letting you go, you're not running away,

Holding your neck tight,
you put up quite the fight,
your heart is no longer beating,
that's what you get for cheating,

your eyes rolled back into your head,
i can't believe that you are dead,
my hands tremble with the blood on them,
is this demon who i really am,

God had told me not to sin,
But in the end, the devil wins,
I have no senses anymore,
I took away this life of yours,

Now you're gone to a place that i'll never be,
and when I am, you will end up with the final plea,
only when i stop to think about it today,
it brings the rest of my days gray,

Your death has made me become insane,
I think there's somethign wrong with my brain,
heart pounding thrice as fast as before,
especially when i look at your corps,

AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH

i'm glad your dead, and so will I,
with this blade, I will end my life,
so don't try to stop me,
I am finally free.

[The Personist]

This is positively dreadful. It's beyond even cliche. I'm sorry, but I really don't think there's any sort of feedback I can give.

[twisted.demon]

Is that a good thing?

[The Personist]

Not at all. this is just riddled with bad rhymes and silly devices. I could hardly make it past the thing about cheating.