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[so_far_gone]

i know it's short and may not seem to have a reason but it's my short poem and it's kinda like my unspoken qoute...

like every heart to the beat before
and every wave to kiss a shore
i'm not the first, i'm not the last...
and soon to be your past
but every morning, when the light
comes creeping in around my eyes
another futurefalls behind
the one i had in mind

[ArTkY_]

You're getting better and better with each work. Good job. Good thing you're not one of those people who posts once and stops because of the bad reviews.

[a speedo model]

i like it.

[boldt_action]

Why does she have a big avatar?

[theMATEOlife]

not bad, not bad.

[lfdfforever]

pretty good

[*nath*]

I like it

[ArTkY_]

Why does she have a big avatar?
good question.

[de la sympathie]

You're getting better and better with each work. Good job. Good thing you're not one of those people who posts once and stops because of the bad reviews.

Works for me. Good job once again, you're definitely improving.