twisted.demon
05/15/09, 05:15 AM
Hey guys, this is my new song, I hope it's not cliche, and I wrote this song for a really good friend named Myah Moxam, who's in grave pain right now, I would really like a few comments on this song, at least 20.. even if they're negative because it will drive me to be a better writer. Thanks a million!
Please Come Home - Robin Gignac (For Myah Moxam)
She's missing her friend, more and more everyday,
Hoping that the pain will go away,
But it stays there in her black heart,
The friend that made her fall so hard,
To the ground, where she never wants to get up,
But why get up, if her life's all fucked
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
As blood is drawn form her wrists,
With every slit, she hopes not to exist,
But more people care about her than she thinks,
She starts to feel her heart shrink,
Losing everyone that she has ever loved,
Hoping an angel would take her above,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
She needs someone to sweep her off her feet,
So she's no longer incomplete,
She needs a friend to be by her side,
So she can start to regain her pride,
Well,
Oh well,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
Please come home,
Please come home.
Please Come Home - Robin Gignac (For Myah Moxam)
She's missing her friend, more and more everyday,
Hoping that the pain will go away,
But it stays there in her black heart,
The friend that made her fall so hard,
To the ground, where she never wants to get up,
But why get up, if her life's all fucked
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
As blood is drawn form her wrists,
With every slit, she hopes not to exist,
But more people care about her than she thinks,
She starts to feel her heart shrink,
Losing everyone that she has ever loved,
Hoping an angel would take her above,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
She needs someone to sweep her off her feet,
So she's no longer incomplete,
She needs a friend to be by her side,
So she can start to regain her pride,
Well,
Oh well,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
As she trembles into tears,
Running away from all her fears,
Running so far, nobody can find her,
Her life's all a blur,
Where did you go,
Will you ever return,
We all miss you so,
We are concerned,
Please come home,
Please come home,
Please come home.