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OveriseFan

01/05/06, 03:37 PM

Each drum beat will correspond
To your heart beat on this night
While we drive in your car to
See the fireworks just right
Why didn't anyone tell
How this is the perfect scene
To end our blockbuster,
This is our soundtrack

If only, if only
You didn't despise me
You're not bigger than this
Does our love pre-exist?
Cupid's arrow it missed
Cupid's arrow it missed

Well, we can stand in a snowglobe
We will watch the world that's below
They'll stare at us and point up far
They're jealous we're the biggest star
Why didn't anyone tell
How this is the perfect scene
To sell our blockbuster,
This is our soundtrack.

If only, if only
You wouldn't forget me
You're not bigger than this
Seal our love with a kiss
You're not bigger than this
Seal our love with a kiss
(Seal our love with a...)

ArTkY_

01/05/06, 03:41 PM

It's very good except... I don't like the bridge:

Why didn't anyone tell
How this is the perfect scene
To end our blockbuster,
This is our soundtrack

Phrasing seems a bit awkward. I love the chorus variation in the end though.

de la sympathie

01/05/06, 03:50 PM

Agreeing with Tariq. But I love this line:

Well, we can stand in a snowglobe
We will watch the world that's below
They'll stare at us and point up far
They're jealous we're the biggest star

good job, james, exelente.

a speedo model

01/05/06, 04:00 PM

very good. i liked it alot.

OveriseFan

01/05/06, 06:35 PM

xnotextoxselfx

01/08/06, 06:47 AM

i liked it alot it was very well put together....

Blared

01/08/06, 10:24 AM

Awesome! Your getting better and better.

de la sympathie

01/08/06, 03:22 PM

James?

Where are you?

OveriseFan

01/08/06, 03:46 PM

James?

Where are you?

here

Sorry for my absence.

SicTrnsitGloria

01/10/06, 09:38 PM

Sweet. To say the least.