Oblivious Girl

[Ron57]

A song I wrote...first one that I actually wrote chords for and actually made into a song. Very simple song. Comments and thoughts would be appreciate.

I've also recorded this song to youtube...so you can get a bit of a better jist of it. Please, any criticism would be appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjqnqz8gkKM

Lyrics -
Oblivious Girl

[Verse 1]
White Snow
Turns to dust.
And the leaves fall down
Oh, the weathers sound is my lust.
For the first time...
I've found something that I can count on

[Pre-Chorus]
You never look back
But I'm always waiting
I can barely ever tell if you can hear what I'm saying.

[Chorus]
I've fallen in love with an oblivious girl
If only she knew that she's my world
She could open up her eyes...
And she would be mine...

[Guitar Interlude]

[Verse 2]
Green Grass
Fades to black.
And the summer heat
Oh it's burnin' up these streets.
For the last time
I watch the world keep growin' older.

[Pre-Chorus]
You never look back
But I'm always waiting,
I can barely ever tell if you can hear what I'm saying

[Chorus]
I've fallen in love with an oblivious girl
If only she knew that she's my world
She could open up her eyes...
And she would be mine...

[Instrumental]

[Verse 3]
Black skies
Fill with stars.
As I stare at them
Oh, how I wish I was on Mars.
Cuz maybe then,
You'd see me for who I really was...

[Final Chorus]
I've fallen for an oblivious girl
If only she knew that she's my world
She might open up her eyes...
And look into the skies...
Oh, if she opened up her eyes...
She would be mine...


© Etcetera57
9-15-08