The Shero of My Dreams

[Rockville Death]

She rules my world, she means everything to me.
She is the coolest girl i know. She can kick serious
ass because...

(chorus)
She's the Shero of my dreams. Oh, yeah! She is very
strong and powerful. She can run like a deer.
She has the strength of Hercules.

No one understands who she really is. But i do.
I know where she's coming from. I understand
her totally. I understand her actions and words
because...

(chorus)

She has a lot of things going on in her life. None that
she can stand. Like the way people treat her and the
way they talk to her. She wants to get away. She wants
to get away oh so bad. But Im there for her no matter
what because...

(chorus)

[SuicideKing]

are you kidding?

[Rockville Death]

No, these are the actual lyrics to the song.

[SuicideKing]

No, these are the actual lyrics to the song.

so you're combining "she" and "hero" into one word... and you don't think that's a little ridiculous? it's hard to take something like that seriously.

[The Personist]

so you're combining "she" and "hero" into one word... and you don't think that's a little ridiculous? it's hard to take something like that seriously.

I find that to be the least ridiculous part of the song...Which is saying a LOT.


Avoid cliches.

Show, don't tell.

Don't use bad portmanteaus.

[saysmydoctor]

greek mythology coreeeeeee

[zonto]

...

[RecklessXRandy]

Shero sounds like something you'd find at a Benihana.

[thespearkid]

Fuck you.

[newtothis]

Really? Really? This is really bad. Like Artfully said, "show, don't tell"

I have heard this before. In every country song of my nightmares.

[Rockville Death]

so you're combining "she" and "hero" into one word... and you don't think that's a little ridiculous? it's hard to take something like that seriously.

Well, the whole point of the song is that I see this girl as hero. A model. That's all this song is saying, really.

[Rockville Death]

And that girl is my girlfriend.

[The Personist]

If I wrote this for my girlfriend, she'd probably beat me up.

[Rockville Death]

If I wrote this for my girlfriend, she'd probably beat me up.
She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.

[Chigwinkle]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.

lololololololo

[billyboatkid]

hahahahaha

[diehtc0ke]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.Thank you. I'm in a public place crying from all my (very loud) laughter.

[doppelganger]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.
i can't tell if this is sarcastic :/

[SuicideKing]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.

jesus.

[The Personist]

This is ridiculous. I usually try to be nice when pieces are less than stellar, but you don't even seem to care about this. Why would you post something you yourself hardly care about?

[Rockville Death]

i can't tell if this is sarcastic :/
No, its not sarcastic. Its the truth.

[saysmydoctor]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.
She is cheating on you with a guy who has balls.

[newtothis]

This is ridiculous. I usually try to be nice when pieces are less than stellar, but you don't even seem to care about this. Why would you post something you yourself hardly care about?

Ditto.

[thespearkid]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.
hahahaha

[ArTkY_]

Fuck you.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[beazer32]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.

:giveup: win.

[anamericangod]

Good to finally have some lyrics to a Mrs.SweeneyTodd song.

[theMATEOlife]

god i love this forum

[Rockville Death]

god i love this forum
I'm glad you do.

:-d

[Rockville Death]

She is cheating on you with a guy who has balls.
uh, no she isn't. I would know if she was.

[Rockville Death]

I'll delete the song if you like. I wouldnt mind for you guys.

[newtothis]

Don't delete it. Just revise it, and preferably make it less cheesy.

[FlowerPower]

This song is the best song ever performed! OMG!!! Go Rockville Death!! Yeah!!!

[TheSkyline]

She didnt beat me up. She admired me for noticing how strong she is and how fast she can run.

Hahahahahahahahahaha

Thank you. I'm in a public place crying from all my (very loud) laughter.

Haha same here...

Good to finally have some lyrics to a Mrs.SweeneyTodd song.

Hahaha, I sure do miss her, those were good times.

[TheSkyline]

By the way, is this not the band that "didn't believe in putting their songs on myspace"?

I think I know why....

[FlowerPower]

Their performances are the COOLEST!!!! Go Rockville Death!!! Yeahhh!!!!!