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theMATEOlife
01/09/06, 01:45 AM
i haven't been doing much poetry as of late, i've been busy working on my essays/short nonfiction work, and my book. however...here's a new one. it probably needs work, but i've been distracted.


hey cowards
come carry me home

the scars are showing
the color is fading
on this masked man
you call a future

so here's the play:
we'll run it down to the core
cancel our subscriptions,
repeat the panic of a new born edition

you'll start the engine
i'll make the move
just one more job, friends
there's nothing here for us to lose

ten months later,
television tells me all I need to hear
of the new revolution.
the all powerful coup d'etat

is a fake fool's game
a hopeless man's regatta.

count the times you've run away
towards the thing you meant to run from
repeat the lines you've run in your head
the ones you'll never be rid of

but hey baby, you faltered.
this skyline speaks of change
from the days we spent unalarmed
you, me, and the getaway car

a new panic is brewing

now, from the shots we fired
i felt a brand new sound
i felt a new world sting
i smell the scent of an intifada

a speedo model
01/09/06, 10:27 AM
it's good. not your best. but still good none the less. keep it up.

lfdfforever
01/09/06, 11:22 AM
it is good