depression statement

[shade77]

illusions. i see them all the time.seeing you there you seemed so blind.targeted by lonelyness.you commit a crime.after all your life passes by. this is nothing but depression its nothing but a statement. im cutting to get out.out of this.faster and faster.my heart keeps beating but not as much as my bleeding! trapped within close walls i want to leave now.u cant seem to... Just give me all.these fireflies.this bullet wont miss scars or lies.being chased by fate.or staying alive this is why depression..

[theMATEOlife]

no! cutting? seriously?

[apoemtothedead]

Let's hear it for proper spacing. :appl:

[preppyak]

illusions.
i see them all the time.
seeing you there you seemed so blind.
targeted by lonelyness.
you commit a crime.
after all your life passes by.
this is nothing but depression
its nothing but a statement.
im cutting to get out.out of this.faster and faster.
my heart keeps beating but not as much as my bleeding!
trapped within close walls
i want to leave now.u cant seem to...
Just give me all.these fireflies.
this bullet wont miss scars or lies.
being chased by fate.or staying alive
this is why depression..

Hmm, even properly spaced, you still lack punctuation and spelling. And it's still bad.

[apoemtothedead]

Hmm, even properly spaced, you still lack punctuation and spelling. And it's still bad.
You deserve an award for taking the time to do that. Talk to someone about getting that.

[theMATEOlife]

i think there's a committee for it or something

[preppyak]

You deserve an award for taking the time to do that. Talk to someone about getting that.
I gave myself a blue ribbon

http://fuzzysquid.com/daily/beers/pabst.jpg

[theMATEOlife]

well played

[apoemtothedead]

I gave myself a red-x

http://fuzzysquid.com/daily/beers/pabst.jpg
fixed.