What is Going On With You

[Rockville Death]

I know how you are at times.
But this is just so stupid.
Its damn frustrating to watch you.
I just don't fucking get it.

(chorus)
What is going on with you!
Why dont you tell me?
Dont you trust me?
Just tell me and I'll understand.

You know how I am.
You know who I am.
We've been friends for 11 years.
I know you and you know me.
Just fucking tell me!

(chorus)

I know something is going on.
I can tell by the way you're acting.
You won't look at me. You'll just ignore me.
Come on, talk to me! Damn it, talk to me!

(chorus)

Alright, fine. Be that way. I dont care.
But if you want to talk, you know I'll be right here.
If you need to call me, its okay with me. I'm here.
I am right here if you need anything at all...

[diehtc0ke]

The reverse psychology at the end is genius.

[Rockville Death]

The reverse psychology at the end is genius.
Thank you.

[The Personist]

Did the shero dump you?

[The Personist]

Did you read the feedback on the one you wrote before? You need to show, not tell. And you need to avoid cliches. And "stupidly frustrating" is just...no.

[Rockville Death]

Did you read the feedback on the one you wrote before? You need to show, not tell. And you need to avoid cliches. And "stupidly frustrating" is just...no.
Artfully Aborted, yeah, I did. But really, okay? These are just songs that Im typing in, alright? I mean, really...

[Rockville Death]

Did the shero dump you?
Dude, its just a song. Okay?

[The Personist]

If they're "just songs" and you don't care about them, then don't post them here where people seek legitimate feedback on their work.

[Rockville Death]

If they're "just songs" and you don't care about them, then don't post them here where people seek legitimate feedback on their work.
ArtfullyAborted, of course I care about my songs. Jeeze! If you dont like them, then you dont have to comment on them. But they're lyrics to songs the band will be performing. People who will see the lyrics that saw our performances will be like, "oh, so those are the lyrics to the song they were performing." That's all.

[theMATEOlife]

These aren't songs.

[Rockville Death]

What??? Of couse they are!

[The Personist]

ArtfullyAborted, of course I care about my songs. Jeeze! If you dont like them, then you dont have to comment on them. But they're lyrics to songs the band will be performing. People who will see the lyrics that saw our performances will be like, "oh, so those are the lyrics to the song they were performing." That's all.

This is a forum for feedback, not for an FYI to whatever fans of yours may stumble in. If you want us to provide feedback, by all means, post the lyrics here. If not, then don't. It's that simple.

[Rockville Death]

Alright. Okay.

[FlowerPower]

It sounds hard-core but a little...you know...

still good, though.

[Rockville Death]

you are cool! We might perform that song on June 2.