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TreMeepThee
01/13/06, 10:56 PM
This house is empty and cold
And my head bashes against my throat
I don’t know what to do
Lost in a memorializing of you
My hands seem worn down
And when I breathe I wanna drown
Why am I questioning?
Isn’t that my purpose in life?
I’m just a stupid joke
Depressing and all that
Wanting something she can never have
Doesn’t know how this feels
I’m sick of all these sorry’s
Don’t say it again, please
Fine not be friends
But leave so I forget you. Forever
apoemtothedead
01/14/06, 12:00 PM
I’m just a stupid joke

I'm hoping that this poem is too.
ArTkY_
01/14/06, 02:45 PM
I'm hoping that this poem is too.
hahaha
Angsty
01/14/06, 11:03 PM
good job, you show emotion
theMATEOlife
01/14/06, 11:05 PM
good job, you show emotion



that's got to be a fucking joke
bonnie17
01/14/06, 11:33 PM
good job, you show emotion i agree. expressing your emotion and how you feel when you write is good. I give you an A++! j/k. Thats good writing.
TreMeepThee
01/15/06, 12:53 AM
hehe you people make me giggle , nice comments guys. i'll take them to consideration
cris545
01/15/06, 07:48 AM
hehe you people make me giggle , nice comments guys. i'll take them to consideration

please be kidding....


show your emotions some other way, that looks like simple plan... if you wanna keep writing read some real poems by real writers, then you'll get the picture of what real writing is like. please.
lfdfforever
01/15/06, 09:52 AM
Man this poem sucks real good.
AWilhelmPetter
01/15/06, 12:15 PM
Never write a poem again. You sucked at it.
preppyak
01/15/06, 12:27 PM
good job, you show emotion
shouldn't you be writing shitty dragon songs for your band

http://www.absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?t=105052
theMATEOlife
01/15/06, 02:45 PM
hey man, not ALL dragon songs are shitty. just that angsty guy's. i'm pretty sure dio had some sweet dragon songs.

just gotta get that out.
MLLMillenium
01/15/06, 04:57 PM
Haha puff the magic dragon?
TreMeepThee
01/15/06, 11:47 PM
Hey i was upset when i wrote it, sue me. I wasn't trying to impress any of you guys, i just wanted to know what you thought of it. And now since i know, please quit with the shit, i got the point.
pdlawry
01/16/06, 12:35 AM
these are bad
preppyak
01/16/06, 11:29 AM
hey man, not ALL dragon songs are shitty. just that angsty guy's. i'm pretty sure dio had some sweet dragon songs.

just gotta get that out.
ha, yeah when I read his songs, all I could think of was Sisqo "Unleash the Dragon"