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isellsuicidexx
01/17/06, 09:09 PM
My boyfriend, Roby, heard about the thing with Justin and he wanted people to judge his shit.


I warned him that you people are harsh.


but whatever.


Hearing Both Sides
Love lingers only staining the pain upon my heart.
As she said the final words, she tour us upart.
I told her I'd prey to save her from being hurt.
Even though she had showed me hell, she had made me feel like dirt.
I admit what I did was sinnful
The the way she treated me was hateful
She did to me what one can never forgive.
But what I did was something that no one would ever want to relive.
Hearing Both Sides
By Robert Drulia




At The End Of Every Raindbow Is A Pile Of Shit
Why does everthing good end bad?
Why do smiles turn to frowns and happy to sad?
If its not enough that after every storm we don't see a rainbow...
When the little good that does happens happens, we lose all we have to show.
Tears turns to blood and worse gets worse.
It's like a concious decision of God's curse.
I forensic peice of evidence proving that Jesus was a mistake.
Because where is he to stop this when our heart does break?
Nowa days they say say that at the end of every rainbow is a pot of shit.
Because good always turns to bad and bad always to to bad and it makes you just want to quit.




Murder Of The Soul
Blood Drips From My Fingers As A Proof Of Murder
Proof Of Homicide From Not The Body But Rather The Soul
I Lie Guilty Mindless Of The Fact That I Hurt Her
A Heart Torn Peices And Ever Reminding Of The Love I Stole
Without Her This Is The Aftermath
A Corpse Of The Beeing I Used To Be
Because I Know Of The Love On Witch I Turned My Back
And All This Pain Of Her Has Become Visible To Me
Now Through My Own Soul I Bleed Her Blood
In A Pool Of Darkness As Gods Own Punishment, My Heart Will Flood.

Murder Of The Soul
By Roby D




Anger From The Depth


Poetic writing tells of the hate that consumes me. Gossiping stories of dark, exposed for all to see. The anger that fuels me of pain, self inflicted, is the anger that keeps me alive and keeps me from death. And the pain of results has become furious. Yet still rage from the depth is so wanted. And I wake ever to feel the feeling that since its birth is lingering and haunting. The pain forfills its destiny and leaves me to die until I feel sorow. The pain brought from death sweeps from day to day, from today to tomarrow. My wishes to let out the pain and scream just once to be forefilled. Only a true understanding can save me from what I claimed to have killed. As I drive towards insanity only thoughts of suicide and homocide pass by. And as I sit, outcasted, one can only ask..... Why....
Anger Of The Depth
By Robert Drulia

apoemtothedead
01/17/06, 09:25 PM
My God, nobody asked for that.

dontgrabtindy
01/17/06, 09:26 PM
seriously why do some people even bother

isellsuicidexx
01/17/06, 09:27 PM
My God, nobody asked for that.

Roby did =]

de la sympathie
01/18/06, 10:35 AM
Holy fuck, I can see why you guys are going out now.

Yours was better.

isellsuicidexx
01/18/06, 10:38 AM
Holy fuck, I can see why you guys are going out now.

Yours was better.

huh? what was better?

de la sympathie
01/18/06, 10:58 AM
huh? what was better?

You or whoever wrote that poem in the other thread, then took eachothers' sides, went off the boards and got pissy, then apprently came back. That one was better than this complete crap.

wyverna
01/18/06, 10:59 AM
That sucked so bad.

DroppedUrPocket
01/18/06, 11:00 AM
Hahaha. This sucks.

DroppedUrPocket
01/18/06, 11:02 AM
What the fuck? Why did you delete the other thread? You goddamn pig.

fromwithin
01/18/06, 11:10 AM
What the fuck? Why did you delete the other thread? You goddamn pig.

Senses Fail was asking for royalties.

theMATEOlife
01/18/06, 11:28 AM
roby? he probably reeks of piss doesn't he? like he was dipped in a vat of piss every morning?

Manbotisdead
01/18/06, 11:32 AM
Looks like we have the next Trent Reznor calibur lyricist.

Don't get me wrong I love NIN, but reznor doesn't need to make everything rhyme.

this kid is worse.

ImpulZe
01/18/06, 11:51 AM
tour

learn how to fucking spell

de la sympathie
01/18/06, 12:36 PM
learn how to fucking spell

Don't you tell THEM to spell if you can't yourself.

SLADE775
01/18/06, 01:10 PM
you Suck.

lostntheseethru
01/18/06, 01:27 PM
Holy fuck, I can see why you guys are going out now.

Yours was better.
the only reason these ones are better is cuz they arent a rip off of someone elses songs..that other one was straight up a senses fail song...but these ones still are kinda....i dunno dumb.

SLADE775
01/18/06, 01:35 PM
the only reason these ones are better is cuz they arent a rip off of someone elses songs..that other one was straight up a senses fail song...but these ones still are kinda....i dunno dumb.

Go read my lyrics megg.

a speedo model
01/18/06, 01:36 PM
hella lame.

GoWaitInTheCar
01/18/06, 06:20 PM
roby? he probably reeks of piss doesn't he? like he was dipped in a vat of piss every morning?

Wow, I thought I only dipped myself in piss vats every morning. ::Sigh::

Hilikus
01/18/06, 07:41 PM
wow, these are awful

lostntheseethru
01/18/06, 07:45 PM
Go read my lyrics megg.
link plz...

edit: nevermind i found it ;)

theMATEOlife
01/18/06, 08:59 PM
Wow, I thought I only dipped myself in piss vats every morning. ::Sigh::

no one for the dane cook reference?

aw ok...

yaz
01/19/06, 07:18 AM
i know this dude tried but that was really bad material. the rhyme scheme sucked, rhyming isnt always important dude. id rather hear amazing lyrics and tune that dont rhyme than a pile of crap that reads like a bad nursery rhyme.