face of an angle

[demon.unleashed]

th eface of an angel is all that is here one butiful freckel equals to one trified tear not ready to leave but has to go wants to go back btu god says noleaving your life is a scary thought i guess its somthing that cant be foughta mother a father a sister and friends a meaningful life that suddently ends anangel is what you were mentto be now just think of all u can see looking over youe family night and day saying i love you in your own spesia way in night we sleep in day we cry you watsh us all from your star in the skyl

[The Personist]

I was promised a poem about angles and here it's just an angel. I am severely disappointed.


On a more serious note, this needs a ton of work. First, line breaks would help make it readable. Second, spell check, because this is just dreadful in terms of grammar. Third, this is very cliche and I think you should seriously revisit what you've written, trying to take each thing in a way that's never been said before. Otherwise, it just falls flat.

[anamericangod]

Obtuse or acute?

[TeamAllison]

Type faster, the less I can understand the better it is.

[evenifitkillsme]

what the balls...

[SuicideKing]

I was promised a poem about angles and here it's just an angel. I am severely disappointed.

i thought the title was great... until i realized it was a typo

[Smeee]

http://www.woodlands-junior.kent.sch.uk/Homework/saxons/images/saxons.jpg

[beazer32]

did you type this with your feet?

[demon.unleashed]

ok my spelling suck i admit it no i did not type it with my hands

[The Personist]

What did you type it with then

[BryterJonah]

At what angle did you type this in?

[newtothis]

I refuse to finish reading this until there is punctuation, proper grammar, and good spelling.

[TheSkyline]

Obtuse or acute?

Hahahahaha

I seriously can not understand more than three or words at a time of this, and when I try to piece it together it makes absolutely no sense, haha.

[BryterJonah]

Face of an Angel
The face on an angel is all that is here
One beautiful freckle equates to one terrified tear
Not ready to leave, but has to go
But God says "NO!"
Leaving your life is a scary thought
I guess it's something that can't be fought

A mother, father, sister, and friends
A meaningful life that suddenly ends
Angel is what you're meant to be
Now just think of all you can see
Looking over your family night and day
Saying "I love you?" in your own special way
In night we sleep, in day we cry
You watch us all from your star in the sky!?


Translated. You're welcome.
And lay off the texting OP.

[Smeee]

Face of an Angel
The face on an angel is all that is here
One beautiful freckle equates to one terrified tear
Not ready to leave, but has to go
But God says "NO!"
Leaving your life is a scary thought
I guess it's something that can't be fought

A mother, father, sister, and friends
A meaningful life that suddenly ends
Angel is what you're meant to be
Now just think of all you can see
Looking over your family night and day
Saying "I love you?" in your own special way
In night we sleep, in day we cry
You watch us all from you're star in the sky!?


Translated. You're welcome.
And lay off the texting OP.

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To be honest, I preferred it when it was about Angles.

[BryterJonah]

fixed