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Slurps
01/21/06, 02:51 PM
Cute Is What You Are

Locks of golden blonde hair
Reach the end of my fingertips
Do I even dare to kiss those lips
I stare into your eyes
And see a crystal blue sea
On a boat you and me

Cute is what you are
I can never get you off my mind
You are hypnotic to my eyes

Your hair is all frizzed
My eyes get caught up in a knot
In my heart you hit the spot
The wind blowing your hair
Like a kite high in the sky
On a beautiful day in July

My heart beat pounds like a bass drum
And you're my drummer

Cute is what you are
I can never get you off my mind
You are hypnotic to my eyes

My heart beat pounds like a bass drum
And you're my drummer

ImpulZe
01/21/06, 05:26 PM
pretty decent

Scott Irvine
01/21/06, 06:05 PM
It goes from ocean imagery to something about a drummer. Not a consistent theme, but a good start at something.

de la sympathie
01/21/06, 07:27 PM
so much better than the first try. good job slrpy.

Slurps
01/21/06, 08:49 PM
so much better than the first try. good job slrpy.

Thank you.