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de la sympathie
01/23/06, 03:51 PM
Thank you to Tariq (ArtKY_ or however the capitalization is) for editing this and adding things. It turned out alot btter than it was before thanks to him. This is supposed to be something about the night of the final dance for 8th grade/graduation. Just so it's not confusing.


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"a little change never hurt anybody"
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(because we all need a little trust, a little change
it's not like we're going to go
it's not like we're growing up fast anyways)

fast-paced and so cliche
something different everyday
it's like this huge elephant in the middle of the room
a pinata filled with hapless young men and ladies in bloom it just seems so much better in retrospect
like "this is the way we've stacked the deck.
this is like the way we spent each day
abusing drama from one week to the next."
and i find myself pouring out my problems like a river
like a working system - open mouth, insert foot.
well i don't need this, because this isn't what i need you to be
to read me like a diary, let you get the worst of me
when maybe means yes, and no means no
you're not my boyfriend, and i'm not your girl
which is another problem that we'll fight about when the conversation lulls.

because we all need a little trust, a little change
it's not like we're gonna go
it's not like we're growing up fast anyways

so let's stomp out some ragged party beat
tear our dresses and kick our feet
oh we need some kind of distraction
something closer than just mutual attraction
where we keep our bodies warm
(but we keep the dance floor warmer)
maybe we all just need a little room, a little breathing room
cause we all could use a little room for change
suddenly it's like we're just growing up and realizing our mistakes
this is the final cut baby, and everything seems wrong
the night is young but the day is long
perfect in our plastic exterior
finally, a chance to feel like we're oh-so-superior

because we all need a little trust, a little change
it's not like we're going to go
it's not like we're growing up fast anyways

well we're all growing up at a different rate
but tonight it's time to mingle and just relate
these people you've known for three years,
hell, tonight you feel like you know less than half of them
that bitch you hate, that jock you fought
and i'm NOT the me of yesterday, and you're NOT the you of today
it seems like it doesn't matter anyways
simply by living in the same town and getting cut out of the same cloth
you know we're not, because we've changed
and i'm me and you're you and it waxes and wanes
time for action! let's get dressed in our finest cliche
let's crash the party and storm the front gate
and as long as every single word we say is coming out wrong
then i'm not sure i want any of us to be right

because we all need a little trust, a little change
it's not like we're going to go
it's not like we're trying to grow up fast anyways
but will we know each other soon?
sloughed off like a prom dress after tonight...

OveriseFan
01/23/06, 04:00 PM
Very nice, but I feel like you can get a little more into it.

I'll post a full thing tonight, when I don't have homework, and the anxiety of writing 2 more things that are newspaper-worthy. haha.

G'night, if I don't get back.

and please please please read my short?

de la sympathie
01/23/06, 04:07 PM
Very nice, but I feel like you can get a little more into it.

I'll post a full thing tonight, when I don't have homework, and the anxiety of writing 2 more things that are newspaper-worthy. haha.

G'night, if I don't get back.

and please please please read my short?

Alright, thank you. And, haha, I already read it, but I'll go comment on it now.

ArTkY_
01/23/06, 04:16 PM
haha, you already know how I think of this.

You took out the boom line! Probably a good thing.

YES, YOU KEPT THE PROM DRESS LINE!

ArTkY_
01/23/06, 04:17 PM
perfect in our plastic exterior
finally, a chance to feel like we're oh-so-superior

Sweet job with that. I couldn't think of anything to rhyme with exterior for some reason.

de la sympathie
01/23/06, 04:23 PM
perfect in our plastic exterior
finally, a chance to feel like we're oh-so-superior

Sweet job with that. I couldn't think of anything to rhyme with exterior for some reason.

Haha, thanks. It took a while to come up with the word "superior" because it's hard to rhyme.

haha, you already know how I think of this.

You took out the boom line! Probably a good thing.

YES, YOU KEPT THE PROM DRESS LINE!

Yeah, I did! Thank you so much for your help, you added alot and it seems alot better now. The prom dress line was too good to kick out. So it's dedicated to you. <3

ArTkY_
01/23/06, 06:17 PM
Haha, thanks. It took a while to come up with the word "superior" because it's hard to rhyme.



Yeah, I did! Thank you so much for your help, you added alot and it seems alot better now. The prom dress line was too good to kick out. So it's dedicated to you. <3
yay!

6 is in its final stages. I'm sending it to you now. If you can, send it to James later.

OveriseFan
01/23/06, 06:44 PM
Shauna, Tariq, wanna add some lines or shit to mine? :wink:

ArTkY_
01/23/06, 07:42 PM
Shauna, Tariq, wanna add some lines or shit to mine? :wink:
Omg? y nOt?

de la sympathie
01/24/06, 02:41 PM
Shauna, Tariq, wanna add some lines or shit to mine? :wink:

Surely Shirley.

swirlofhues
01/24/06, 07:17 PM
shauna, this would sound awesome if you performed it. it was good, you've got a catchy style.

a speedo model
01/25/06, 08:59 AM
i love it.

de la sympathie
01/25/06, 03:00 PM
shauna, this would sound awesome if you performed it. it was good, you've got a catchy style.

thanks, christine. <3

i love it.

thank you as well.

OveriseFan
01/25/06, 07:04 PM
This sucks as much as you(and we all know Shauna's not a ho)

GoWaitInTheCar
01/26/06, 06:39 PM
I like the first part better, it kinda ran together at the end. But I felt it, I did indeed.

7.5/10

cris545
01/26/06, 08:40 PM
damn I like this a lot...