crimsontragedy
01/24/06, 09:29 PM
With love comes tragedy, I dont want this to end, all I want to do is hold your hand, your body close to mine, skin seperated by the thinest of lines, froze in your eyes, I'm lost in all time, here's my heaven, forever I want to stay, please never go away, you are my world, my heart ablaze, praying for destiny to keep you here, affection shown for you my dear, my heart and soul reside in your embrace...
this is more of a love/feeling poem than a hate/pain poem like Tears and Ashes, I wrote this one for my girl friend, but I need your help because she could be lieing and telling me it's good, but in all reality it sucks, please comment... I also have a myspace if any one wants to add me- www.myspace.com/chavie27 (http://www.myspace.com/chavie27)
this is more of a love/feeling poem than a hate/pain poem like Tears and Ashes, I wrote this one for my girl friend, but I need your help because she could be lieing and telling me it's good, but in all reality it sucks, please comment... I also have a myspace if any one wants to add me- www.myspace.com/chavie27 (http://www.myspace.com/chavie27)