It Takes Two To Tango [Archive]

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:15 PM

It Takes Two To Tango

Unlimited minutes
Fighting on the phone
Getting ready for dates
Throwing on cologne
Driving you home
At the end of the night
Why can't they end
As a memorable highlight

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo

Grabbing you a rose
To put in your mouth
The sound of the bongos
Our love is going south
The sound of our feet
Pounding on the floor
Hitting every beat
As you shove me out the door

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo

Walking home with the tune stuck in my head
Not regreting any minute of it

de la sympathie

01/29/06, 06:19 PM

this was so much better than any of your other stuff.

but "mouth" and "drought" do not rhyme.

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:22 PM

this was so much better than any of your other stuff.

but "mouth" and "drought" do not rhyme.

Thanks.... but hardly anything rhymes with mouth :'( and I thought drought was close.

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:24 PM

What about "Our love is heading south"?

de la sympathie

01/29/06, 06:30 PM

What about "Our love is heading south"?

If by "going south" you mean disintegrating, then yes. If you're trying to write something nice, then definitely not.

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:33 PM

If by "going south" you mean disintegrating, then yes. If you're trying to write something nice, then definitely not.

Yes I mean by disintegrating... it's the best thing that rhymes with mouth and is like the point i'm trying to get.

de la sympathie

01/29/06, 06:41 PM

Yes I mean by disintegrating... it's the best thing that rhymes with mouth and is like the point i'm trying to get.

yeah, then it works. alright. good work, again. this was so much better than the other things you've posted in the lyrics section.

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:43 PM

yeah, then it works. alright. good work, again. this was so much better than the other things you've posted in the lyrics section.

Thanks, ya it sounds pretty good if I do say so myself.

OveriseFan

01/29/06, 06:49 PM

As a memorable highlight

and

The last 2 lines DEFINATELY need to be changed. No flow.

not bad though, at all.

Slurps

01/29/06, 06:53 PM

As a memorable highlight

and

The last 2 lines DEFINATELY need to be changed. No flow.

not bad though, at all.

OK, thanks.

Psssssss James, I made a new account on UG and deleted all my cookies and stuff. Don't say anything when you see this song in UG about this being the same person as slurpeeXcore.

Slurps

01/29/06, 07:46 PM

So this is my best piece yet.

de la sympathie

01/30/06, 06:41 AM

Yes.

ArTkY_

01/30/06, 06:51 AM

Good work Slurps.

Slurps

01/30/06, 01:58 PM

Good work Slurps.

Thanks Tariq:D

a speedo model

01/30/06, 02:03 PM

not bad.

OveriseFan

01/30/06, 03:12 PM

Q: Why does everyone always read Slurpsicles stuff?

A: Cause he bumps like 2 horny gorillas...

Oh snap.

ArTkY_

01/30/06, 03:15 PM

Q: Why does everyone always read Slurpsicles stuff?

A: Cause he bumps like 2 horny gorrillas...

Oh snap.
If you spelled gorilla right I would have given you a "Zing" but...

OveriseFan

01/30/06, 03:17 PM

If you spelled gorilla right I would have given you a "Zing" but...

called a typo brah...

Slurps

01/30/06, 08:11 PM

Q: Why does everyone always read Slurpsicles stuff?

A: Cause he bumps like 2 horny gorillas...

Oh snap.

Not on AP, good try. Your mixing up UG and AP.

LostSymphonies

01/30/06, 08:13 PM

i was hoping this would be a thread about Billy Madison..very disappointed
"cuz it takes two..to tango..or somethin' like that.."

Slurps

01/30/06, 08:16 PM

i was hoping this would be a thread about Billy Madison..very disappointed
"cuz it takes two..to tango..or somethin' like that.."

Haha, nope this is the lyrics forum not the entertainment forum.

LostSymphonies

01/30/06, 08:22 PM

Haha, nope this is the lyrics forum not the entertainment forum.

haha whoops i didn't even notice

SLADE775

01/31/06, 04:04 PM

My rating = :\

If you want me to be honest with you I will...

they're not awful by any means but you still need to think about using a wider variety of writting techniques

It Takes Two To Tango

Unlimited minutes
Fighting on the phone
Getting ready for dates (this line needs to be changed)
Throwing on cologne
Driving you home (what the? Where's the transition?)
At the end of the night
Why can't they end
As a memorable highlight ( not bad)

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo (I like this chorus)

Grabbing you a rose
To put in your mouth (I get it, but it's a little too silly)
The sound of the bongos (same)
Our love is going south (again, transition?)
The sound of our feet
Pounding on the floor
Hitting every beat
As you shove me out the door (these last four lines are fine)

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo

Walking home with the tune stuck in my head
Not regreting any minute of it (needs to be changed)

Slurps

01/31/06, 04:27 PM

My rating = :\

If you want me to be honest with you I will...

they're not awful by any means but you still need to think about using a wider variety of writting techniques

It Takes Two To Tango

Unlimited minutes
Fighting on the phone
Getting ready for dates (this line needs to be changed)
Throwing on cologne
Driving you home (what the? Where's the transition?)
At the end of the night
Why can't they end
As a memorable highlight ( not bad)

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo (I like this chorus)

Grabbing you a rose
To put in your mouth (I get it, but it's a little too silly)
The sound of the bongos (same)
Our love is going south (again, transition?)
The sound of our feet
Pounding on the floor
Hitting every beat
As you shove me out the door (these last four lines are fine)

Get dressed
Get ready
It's time to tango
Lets swing
Lets dance
Speed up the tempo

Walking home with the tune stuck in my head
Not regreting any minute of it (needs to be changed)

Thanks Slade, honesty is the best advice.

SLADE775

01/31/06, 05:01 PM

Thanks Slade, honesty is the best advice.

No prob.

And don't ever think I'm being a dick with my remarks....If you honestly care about what I think than I'm pretty falttered....

And I know what it's like man....I've been writting lyrics for about 10 years.

ArTkY_

01/31/06, 08:59 PM

No prob.

And don't ever think I'm being a dick with my remarks....If you honestly care about what I think than I'm pretty falttered....

And I know what it's like man....I've been writting lyrics for about 10 years.
haha, wowwwwww. And I thought I've been writing for a long time... 4 years. Well, I am much younger than you...

OveriseFan

02/01/06, 10:23 AM

haha, wowwwwww. And I thought I've been writing for a long time... 4 years. Well, I am much younger than you...

I've been writing 4 years. pwned.

(Maybe it's 3, if you're not counting stories and shit.)

Slurps

02/01/06, 04:03 PM

I've been writing decent stuff for a month...... hahaha.

ArTkY_

02/01/06, 04:07 PM

called a typo brah...
spelled is not a typo...

ArTkY_

02/01/06, 04:08 PM

I've been writing 4 years. pwned.

(Maybe it's 3, if you're not counting stories and shit.)
If you count stories then I've been writing 6.