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ImpulZe
01/30/06, 01:05 PM
The Oxygen from Planet Earth is Wearing Thin
Maybe we should switch to Nitrogen or Possibly Cyanide
We could crumble our Vocal Chords and asophagus
So you could Never Complain Again

We started over with Leaving each other
The Static from our electronic Hearts is Fading Away
The Nitrous Oxide in our Veins is posioning the Nerves
Our Nerveous systems are deteriating away

Maybe if we pull up our attena's up our Connection would be clearer
But otherwise its like were always off-air
But the hard-drives in our Heads are full of viruses
And were Still Stuck on Dial-Up

We started over with Leaving each other
The Static from our electronic Hearts is Fading Away
The Nitrous Oxide in our Veins is posioning the Nerves
Our Nerves and systems are deteriating away

Baby, Meet the Ages
Its not 2000 anymore
The Software, has been updated
and My memory off you has been erased

We started over with Leaving each other
The Static from our electronic Hearts is Fading Away
The Nitrous Oxide in our Veins is posioning the Nerves
Our Nerves and systems are deteriating away
punk4lyfe
01/30/06, 01:17 PM
Whats with the random capital letters?
Chasing Suns
01/30/06, 01:25 PM
Whats with the random capital letters?


Yeah what's the deal?
Hilikus
01/30/06, 04:22 PM
i actually like it quite a bit, i hate the title though
OveriseFan
01/30/06, 04:25 PM
asophagus

Spelled that wrong.

But it's not too bad...
AdmistAPoision
01/30/06, 04:57 PM
I like it.
I personally had to think a bit slower while reading it and a bit longer after each chunk of passage.
The words some of which aren't really big words I guess ones I don't use on a daily basis...lol.
Isn't the capital letters being -the word is suppose to be capitalize and or placing- importance on that word within the sentence. Certain ones I've read over there are those glued on to spelling errors like the germs on my pencil eraser. As for me I think if it only deterred from the meaning YEs if not than doesn't hurt at all.Get with the Ages< is what I think is cool in the title.

BYE
ArTkY_
01/30/06, 05:59 PM
Fucking great. You've gotten good.
ImpulZe
01/31/06, 06:00 AM
Fucking great. You've gotten good.

Fucking amazing.