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OveriseFan
02/04/06, 09:29 PM
Thanks Shauna and Diego(ew)

I spit straight into the bright, burning sun
Hoping to create a vivid rainbow
All I ever received for my actions
Is a wad of saliva on my cheek

And my friends say that I'm crazy when I
Talk about shit like this, but I can't stop
So I'll keep spitting and sitting, wasting
My whole life staring at the shining sun

Well are those boys still coming round your house?
The ones who said they wanted to stick their
You knows in your you know; know what I mean?
Well how did all of that go anyway...?

Did you hear? I have a new girl on my arm...
She's so beautiful, the real Ginny-type
Long red hair, and so sophisticated
Her voice resounding through my head echoing

Have you looked at the beauty of the world?
The lights in the city aren't as bright as the blaze...
It's impossible to see them with your Star-Sun Glasses
Which reflect light in most magnificent ways

cris545
02/05/06, 07:02 AM
i really like this one, great job :)

OveriseFan
02/05/06, 07:11 AM
i really like this one, great job :)

Thank you!

Shauna and I spent like... an hour or so last night editing it to get it perfect. So thank you so much.

cris545
02/05/06, 07:29 AM
Thank you!

Shauna and I spent like... an hour or so last night editing it to get it perfect. So thank you so much.\

no wonder I couldn't even think of one thing to fix :)

ArTkY_
02/05/06, 10:24 AM
Good stuff man, nice to see it perfected.

de la sympathie
02/05/06, 10:49 AM
Haha! Go James!

You're going to win for sure.