The Fragile Line Between Insecurity and Insanity

[x_Thrice_x]

Alright, so this is my second attempt at a song. Feedback, as always, is the best thing you can give. Positive, negative, anything. Thanks. Heh, my favourite part happens to be the title.

The Fragile Line Between Insecurity and Insanity

I thought you'd said goodbye.
I'm jealous of it all.
Now you know why,
My knuckles bleed down these walls.

With every last punch,
They're breaking down.
It's oh, so reminiscient of me,
But you're too damn naive to see.

I don't care what you said.
I need to let it all out.
I'll make you listen to me,
I'll scream and I'll shout.

Every word like a bullet,
Sent to pierce your skin,
Shot from my tongue,
Waiting for you to give in.

I don't care what you said.
I need to let it all out.
I'll make you listen to me,
I'll scream and I'll shout.

You think I do it for kicks?
You think this is just a game?
Take a look in the mirror!
You'd do the exact same!

I don't choose to be this way,
It's not just a crutch,
Hear me out!
(Please, please!)
Listen to me, please, just this once!
(Not another word after this)

Atleast you'll have this song,
to hate me with or remember me by.
So here's what I have to say,
"This is your final goodbye."

[x_Thrice_x]

...anything :)

[theMATEOlife]

it's too cliche


i feel like ive heard it before