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Make Out Kid
02/08/06, 02:10 PM
Touching your hand to air
"It will make us feel closer"
This night is quiet
Everything is silenced by memory

The clocks are slowing
Always dying, but giving us a little more time
These moments passing
But never quite touching
You never really were all there

Your mind is wondering
While we are searching
The only thing alive - Your hand

a speedo model
02/08/06, 02:11 PM
not bad. it isn't great or amazing but i like it.

ArTkY_
02/08/06, 02:42 PM
Its meh. Not bad though.

Make Out Kid
02/08/06, 03:00 PM
Thanks for the replies.
I don't think I did too bad since it's from one page of a book (that thing is littered with quotes and paraphrasing)
Keep em coming.