Only a stanza... but I'll finish it tonight. Pinkyswear.

[OveriseFan]

This piece is going to have a 3-way-meaning for even me, so when it's done, don't ask for it to be explained. If you can't relate to it at all, or if you can't find any meaning in it, I don't want you reading my stuff.

:)

The rest of it's coming tonight... there's more already written, but it's not that good.

This is one of those things I can't explain
It's another sleepless night fighting the rain
That patters on my rooftop, where we spent so many nights
Looking out into the city and all it's shining lights

[ArTkY_]

AABB eh?

[Slurps]

Looks pretty good, i'll try to remember to read the rest tonight.

[Lairy_fights]

Its sounds pretty good so far, can't wait for the rest :)

[OveriseFan]

Yeah... I'll try to finish this, but I do have 2 new pieces for you that I wrote at work.

I'll post them in a minute.

And yes Tariq, rhyming in this(there have been 4 pieces without it before this, deal)

[ArTkY_]

Yeah... I'll try to finish this, but I do have 2 new pieces for you that I wrote at work.

I'll post them in a minute.

And yes Tariq, rhyming in this(there have been 4 pieces without it before this, deal)
I'm not hating on the rhyming. Everyone rhymes. At least its not ABAB.

[OveriseFan]

I'm not hating on the rhyming. Everyone rhymes. At least its not ABAB.

ABAB is a hard one to do well.

"AABB eh?"

Was that just a question then?

haha.