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chris868
02/14/06, 02:48 PM
It was quite awkwardly polite that you happened to mention
The current circumstances I’ve rendered myself in
But it would appear in this moment, you’ve all
Decorated with praise, that although I was addicted
I’m better now-a-days?
Please forgive my hesitation to entertain your reminiscing
Did it occur that when your words fall out?
They carefully suggest an unfinished sentence
Nor yield a hint of honesty but still you preach your lesson
Blessed for such a family of such luck to be neglecting
Eagerly awaiting the moral of the story, I scan the envelopes
In which you’ve generously outdone your obligation
Friends, drink up, dig in, and enjoy the graduation
Not only learned am I, but learned are you
In unassuming manipulation

theMATEOlife
02/14/06, 03:57 PM
i might be wrong, but this doesn't make any sense.


if it does, i don't like it.

preppyak
02/14/06, 04:00 PM
It was quite awkwardly polite that you happened to mention
The current circumstances I’ve rendered myself in
But it would appear in this moment, you’ve all
Decorated with praise, that although I was addicted
I’m better now-a-days?
holy run on sentence batman. And yeah, it didn't seem to make a lot of sense

cris545
02/14/06, 05:37 PM
holy run on sentence batman.
hahahaha batman

I agree, I got lost somewhere in the middle

GoWaitInTheCar
02/15/06, 08:07 PM
hahahaha batman

I agree, I got lost somewhere in the middle

I felt stupid, cause I thought I was the only one who did that. It kinda got jumbled together in the middle and forced my eyes to wander.

If you seperate it more and adds some periods, it won't be to bad.

apoemtothedead
02/15/06, 09:39 PM
Poetry minus brain.

yaz
02/16/06, 07:29 AM
Poetry minus brain.
do you have anything nice to say about anyone?!

apoemtothedead
02/16/06, 03:26 PM
do you have anything nice to say about anyone?!
Yeah. The people with talent...