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Vint
02/16/06, 05:36 PM
Monologue to Heaven

Father Savior, for you have made me see
That wounds like these will heal;
I quiver, that a God like thou could be,
So before you now I kneel
And on this oak I pray,
And From with the money I pay
I form my right to say:
“Unburdened, I am free”.

Through this lattice do I now speak
These words that should mean little.
Were I not here to be contrite; “Tis weak!”
O Lord, my faith in this cathedral is brittle.

Father Savior, I seek freedom from this semblance,
For although I see no evil in monotony,
To me it is only a step above complete dissemblance.
“O, how I long to smell the betony!”
My cleric, for you I shall depart with good word:
“Even though cathedrals crumble,
In my heart still I stay humble.
Servants we are of Church’s power,
Freedom is in God’s last hour”.




I had to write a poem for school.

ArTkY_
02/16/06, 08:10 PM
I like it. You don't see this kind of stuff around here.

pinkjinx87
02/16/06, 08:54 PM
I think it's inspirational and beautiful.

Vint
02/19/06, 06:10 PM
Thanks! :D

a speedo model
02/20/06, 09:13 AM
very good.

Vint
02/20/06, 01:22 PM
very good.

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