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[Tea Rox]

I know I said forever
I said that I could wait
But I've been waiting too long
And now it's a bit too late
Because I'm beginning to see a pattern
you’re breaking every promise you've made
just admit that it will never happen
your angel light has already started to fade...
Remember when you promised me we'd run
Never turning back for anyone
You've said it thousands of times before
And now I'm mourning for that day I never saw
I spent so long dreaming of that day
You'd sweep me off my feet and take me away
I don't believe I'm giving up my hope for you
It's all your fault this isn't ending the way I wanted it to
Remember when you promised me we'd run
Never turning back for anyone
And I believed all of the stupid things you said
I let myself get in over my head
Remember when you promised me we'd run!
(Just because I'm gone don't take away your life)
Never turning back for anyone!
(What was it that led us to the knife?)
Trembling hands now grip the blade
to end this mess that we have made...
(Remember when you promised me we'd run)
I know I said forever
But that was a stupid lie
(Remember...)
Forever doesn't exist
Cause we're all gonna die.

[Tea Rox]

First time user so I don't really know how this works. I think u can comment and if u can, PLEASE COMMENT! I'd love some honest feedback. Tea.
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[Jabble524]

I think "forever doesn't exist" would be a good title for your writing. It really sums up the main emotional point. Other then that, I'd just give it a few edits. But the main structure seems to be in place.

[jcrawfish]

nice

[townie88]

theres never forever for the title