January -

[SLADE775]

This song is part of a 5 song acoustic EP simply called "Winter"

tracks
-November
-December
-January
-February
-There is no passion in your eyes only desperation now


January

By this time
They've compiled their lies
In a stack so high
They've lost track of all reasons why
This shelter of denial
In Capsules floating downstream - thru cracks in the frozen concrete
While this blizzard shows no sign of receeding

He hunts
Not because he needs to
He does it to cloak the truth
Not so brave
To honor his father he'll weather this icy shade

Attrition
One by one it's just too much
pack your bags
wrap the rope
Over the edges - lets take off and begin
Newly refreshed
Just around the corner - warm new lands

She flees
Not because it's neccessary
She does it to cloak the truth
Not so brave
To spite her mother who made her this way

By this time
Their eyes can't handle the light
Not so concise - Not so alive
When the snow melts - they'll find the tainted remains of their lives

[SLADE775]

This forum is ghey.

[preppyak]

This forum is ghey.
it's not the general forum, it's a small group of people who comment, wait til tonight for it to be commented on. I know I'll have time to read and think through it then

[SLADE775]

it's not the general forum, it's a small group of people who comment, wait til tonight for it to be commented on. I know I'll have time to read and think through it then

K.

[preppyak]

K.
I actually like it alot, especially the first verse.

[Slaytus]

strong 1st verse then i kinda lost interest. although the third verse made me picture a mountain climber and snow?

[xChasingsafetyx]

I definitely enjoyed it.
Good work.

[SLADE775]

I definitely enjoyed it.
Good work.

Thanks.

And thanks to the rest of you guys for commenting.

If anyone ever wants me to read their lyrics....PM and I will.

[pinkjinx87]

Nice..I liked it.

[cris545]

Thanks.

And thanks to the rest of you guys for commenting.

If anyone ever wants me to read their lyrics....PM and I will.

I liked this, nice job.

[ArTkY_]

Its pretty good Slade.

Just so you know, I'm working on a 12 song concept album right now called "We Swear That This Year Will Be Better Than The Last" and each song is named the name of a month... so I'm not copying you for further reference.

[OveriseFan]

Its pretty good Slade.

Just so you know, I'm working on a 12 song concept album right now called "We Swear That This Year Will Be Better Than The Last" and each song is named the name of a month... so I'm not copying you for further reference.

OMG

I HATE YOU

DIE

/rant

(I'll read this once I'm done my 2 projects all due tomorrow)

[ArTkY_]

OMG

I HATE YOU

DIE

/rant

(I'll read this once I'm done my 2 projects all due tomorrow)
The albums gonna take a year, since its about this year of my life.

[OveriseFan]

The albums gonna take a year, since its about this year of my life.

(Then I'll release mine before you)

pwned.

[OveriseFan]

I like it a lot...

Not so brave
To spite her mother who made her this way

Especially the "Not so brave"

nice job.

[SLADE775]

Its pretty good Slade.

Just so you know, I'm working on a 12 song concept album right now called "We Swear That This Year Will Be Better Than The Last" and each song is named the name of a month... so I'm not copying you for further reference.

That sounds like an awesome idea.

And I wouldn't have accused you of that anyway....lots of people have done similar things.

I've just finished my 'Winter' Ep (writting wise)

Noe I have to do the summer one...

-May
-June
-July
-August
-There is no passion in your eyes only despereation now - pt 2

[ArTkY_]

That sounds like an awesome idea.

And I wouldn't have accused you of that anyway....lots of people have done similar things.

I've just finished my 'Winter' Ep (writting wise)

Noe I have to do the summer one...

-May
-June
-July
-August
-There is no passion in your eyes only despereation now - pt 2
Thanks

Just in case.

Good luck, I look forward to it.

[ArTkY_]

(Then I'll release mine before you)

pwned.
Mine's gonna be better.

[OveriseFan]

Mine's gonna be better.

SIKE!

[ArTkY_]

SIKE!
lol, we have totally different styles. I look forward to yours. You've been like writing songs like crazy lately, I take my sweet time.

[chris868]

this is great work and i look foreword to more

[SLADE775]

this is great work and i look foreword to more

Thanks a lot.

[weezer182]

i really like the whole winter ep idea with each month being a song

[SLADE775]

bum......p

[a speedo model]

i like it alot.