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OveriseFan
02/27/06, 02:46 PM
I'm so proud of this one. Thanks Shauna for guiding me at the end.

(She paints me the prettiest pictures
And I pin each one to my refridgerator)

Darling haven't you heard?
They all call me a killer...
Silently I stalk my prey
Like a snow white owl at night
Or a lioness in the day.

And as she stalks she calls my name:

"Come on baby, call on me,"
She said through tired eyes.
"Come on baby, die like me,"
She said with a fading smile.

Sending messages like the synapse
Connect my heart and my mind
She keeps dawing me into the hospital
Where they're taught to be hospitable
And wear smiles that still don't shine.

I saw her mother bawling her eyes out
Next to the emergency room door
I just looked down at the picture she made
Of me and her still sitting on the floor.

Pictures don't change as much
As the people in them do.

Still I hear her calling from the drawing room:

"Come on baby, dance for me.
She said with leaping feet
Come on baby, die for me,
She spoke without a smile."

With the shiver in my spine I realized she could be the one...
It's such a travesty that all the pretty ones die young.
a speedo model
02/27/06, 03:14 PM
i like it.
ArTkY_
02/27/06, 03:52 PM
Did you redo this?
OveriseFan
02/27/06, 03:53 PM
Did you redo this?

No, just used the title.

This is totally different.
ArTkY_
02/27/06, 04:01 PM
No, just used the title.

This is totally different.
Yeah, that's what I meant to say, sorry. I like this. The first one (with this title) was horrible.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 09:58 AM
I'm not liking this at all buddy.

Sending messages like the synapse
Connect my heart and my mind

What's up there TREOS? :rolleyes:

Come on baby, dance for me.
She said with leaping feet
Come on baby, die for me,
She spoke without a smile."

This is just poorly written....It truly makes me cringe.
wyverna
02/28/06, 10:12 AM
I like it.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 10:14 AM
I like it.

You would.

Erasing your crappy thread was a good choice.
preppyak
02/28/06, 12:48 PM
You would.

Erasing your crappy thread was a good choice.
yeah, i just figured you were going for the over the top approach to catch on in the general forums, but you really are just an arrogant prick...
de la sympathie
02/28/06, 02:12 PM
You would.

Erasing your crappy thread was a good choice.

Be nice, Slade. You don't need to start that stuff in here too buddy.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:23 PM
yeah, i just figured you were going for the over the top approach to catch on in the general forums, but you really are just an arrogant prick...

I tell it like it is.

So fuck you man.

If somebody writes crappy lyrics.....I'll voice my opinion.

No sugar-coating here.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:27 PM
Be nice, Slade. You don't need to start that stuff in here too buddy.

I am nice.

You know that....people start shit with me first (usually).

I can be very nice.
OveriseFan
02/28/06, 02:30 PM
Eh...

Hop off Slade, because though he usually goes too far, he always has a good point.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:32 PM
Eh...

Hop off Slade, because though he usually goes too far, he always has a good point.

Thanks.....

I've always enjoyed you being around here.....you have had some of the funniest posts ever.

I like your lyrics as well.....but you took a jab at mine, so here I am.
de la sympathie
02/28/06, 02:32 PM
I am nice.

You know that....people start shit with me first (usually).

I can be very nice.

Hahaha, I know. But saying that to her... eh, it seemed a tad harsh.

You are definitely very nice sometimes.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:35 PM
Hahaha, I know. But saying that to her... eh, it seemed a tad harsh.

You are definitely very nice sometimes.

Her lyrics are garbage.

Plain and simple.

I'm not gonna sit here and B.S. about it. If she never wrote another line again, it would be a blessing.

I am very harsh about certain things....I'd tell you that I'd ease up, but that would be a lie.

I still love you though Shauna.
de la sympathie
02/28/06, 02:39 PM
Her lyrics are garbage.

Plain and simple.

I'm not gonna sit here and B.S. about it. If she never wrote another line again, it would be a blessing.

I am very harsh about certain things....I'd tell you that I'd ease up, but that would be a lie.

I still love you though Shauna.

Haha, I love you too Slade. And I know what you mean, but this isn't even her thread, it's James' thread, and we're here to discuss his lyrics, so I guess it just seemed a bit out-of-place to me. Oh well, whatever.

Plus if you eased up on people or stopped being you I don't think I could post on AP again without it being totally weird.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:46 PM
Haha, I love you too Slade. And I know what you mean, but this isn't even her thread, it's James' thread, and we're here to discuss his lyrics, so I guess it just seemed a bit out-of-place to me. Oh well, whatever.

Plus if you eased up on people or stopped being you I don't think I could post on AP again without it being totally weird.

Maybe it was out of place.

But yeah...I'll never change.

I'd love to dicuss James's song.
OveriseFan
02/28/06, 02:56 PM
You really think it's shit?

haha.

P.S. Sweet, sweet karma.
SLADE775
02/28/06, 02:56 PM
You really think it's shit?

haha.

P.S. Sweet, sweet karma.

No I don't.
OveriseFan
02/28/06, 03:01 PM
I'm sorry we fought baby, let's make up and make love.

(Minustheninja, I see you, leave a comment or I'll go ninjitsu on you.)
dashboard1190
02/28/06, 03:13 PM
i like the title.
OveriseFan
02/28/06, 03:39 PM
i like the title.

A.K.A.

I DIDNT RLY READ ANYTHING LOL!

BUT P!atD R HXC