Atlanatic Aftermath - Arizona Pop Punk / Hardcore

[apsterling]

Our Myspace (http://www.myspace.com/atlanticaftermath)
Check it- we've got a new song and layout up.
Comments and Criticism are greatly appreciated!

[Big_Guy]

this isn't very good, but you guys are young and bound to get better. keep at it

[Burn_Burn_Burn]

Agreed. I actually think the new song is really catchy, so keep at it!

[apsterling]

this isn't very good, but you guys are young and bound to get better. keep at it

What do you think could be fixed. Or is it just all around not well done?

[Big_Guy]

What do you think could be fixed. Or is it just all around not well done?

just the songwriting in general is pretty amateurish, but like I said, you guys are young and the songwriting will come in time.

I'd have to listen again to give you specifics. but decent job for what I'm guessing is your first recorded stuff


your singer could use a few lessons. he sounds out of key on more than a few occasions, but he's got mad potential to be a great singer. the playing could be better, but I'll chalk that up to you guys being 16. I'm sure you dudes will be tearing shit up in a few years

[apsterling]

just the songwriting in general is pretty amateurish, but like I said, you guys are young and the songwriting will come in time.

I'd have to listen again to give you specifics. but decent job for what I'm guessing is your first recorded stuff


your singer could use a few lessons. he sounds out of key on more than a few occasions, but he's got mad potential to be a great singer. the playing could be better, but I'll chalk that up to you guys being 16. I'm sure you dudes will be tearing shit up in a few years

Yeah, vocals we've all been working on, so we can back him up etc. And he's working on it. I think he's taking lessons in what free time he has. And we're still working on really rounding our sound out. But thanks for the suggestions, I'll pass em' on to the band. They're set on getting into a studio next week but I really don't think it's worth it but I can't really change their mind.

[apsterling]

We've got two pretty good shows coming up for anyone in the Phoenix area;

August 14th we're playing Modified Arts with Asteria, A Love Like Pi, Gabriel The Marine and Theatre Breaks Loose
August 21st we're playing Chyro Arts with The Fast Track, Here's To Adventure, Left Centered and The Scenery.

Plus pretty soon our vocalist is heading back into the studio to finish up, so we'll have some new tracks up in the coming month or two.

[apsterling]

We've got a new track as well as a new layout up, with more new tracks to come! Please check it out and let me know what you think!
Right here (http://www.myspace.com/atlanticaftermath)

[apsterling]

Anyone got any thoughts on Final Escape?