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[Alex Djaferis]

free admission exhibition of not caring who i am
the curtains raised - my will ablazed - no script given but now my eyes are raised
the feather in the ink - i search for the missing link
my permission for you explanations have expired
this book is closed for patience will not outlast my bones - let alone my skin and my aging soul
this search for truth has reached its toll

and so i sit and watch the night sky
let the insignificance sink in
and as i watch the stars
i make one last wish
to feel like i am something more

[ArTkY_]

free admission exhibition of not caring who i am
the curtains raised - my will ablazed - no script given but now my eyes are raised
the feather in the ink - i search for the missing link

Best lines. The ending is a bit cliche though.

[Alex Djaferis]

yeah the end is. but its what i was doing :) so i added it hahaha.
thanks for reading tariq.

[Boring Pop Song]

i like it, but try not to force your rhymes. but overall it's a good read

[weezer182]

i like it

[a speedo model]

i like it, a couple parts seem forced but overall it was very good.

[Alex Djaferis]

thanks for the comments. :)

i see how it seems forced. the song is meant to be kind of quick/anthemic tone...kind of like old vaux...so i wanted it to sort of have that rhyme/force thing going through it.