Vanitas

[Wheez]

Memento mori, sweet angel.
The men downstairs, outside, are wearing red and digging graves. Shovels reaching into the ground, dancing beneath the macabre twilight.
Up the street a terrified man is falling to his knees; his arms lynched behind his back and his eyes looking towards the sky. He needs you.
At night these streets are infested with a sickly beast. The air pollutes itself, and the children die.
They needed you out there, but now you’re mine. Lovely angel, I hate to do this, but this world will not allow regret.
Guide my mouth upon your lips. Let my body be forgiven, this is their fault.

[yaz]

I actually like this, i like the way it tells a story, and i like the (i can only assume it is) Italian lyrics 'Memento Mori.' my only complaint would be that tere is not a lot of it, do you have other parts written that we could see? i think this song has real potential, also if you could get an audio link on here too, so we could hear it, thatd be good. all in all a good piece.

[Wheez]

Hahaha, very good on the Italian pick up. There's not really any more to it, and, ahaha, it's not a song. I don't have the talent for that...:(

But thanks for the kind words. Rare thing 'round these parts.

[Boring Pop Song]

i like this a lot, it's original. keep posting

[a speedo model]

i like it.