much easier said

[Boring Pop Song]

if i close my heart, the open road will be much easier
and all the things i leave behind, they wouldn't really matter
what's the problem? what would be the difference
this town would be just the same whether or not i'm in it
these streets will still be cracked
like my knuckles when i'm restless
and everyone will still know everyone else's business
the gossip around here just makes me sick
if these people want the bullshit they should just go lie in it

so go to sleep.
i'll meet you in the a.m.
when we could hitch a ride out of this town
we'll take the clothes on our backs, some cds and a backpack
full of things we'll need to get ourselves around
let's go somewhere real far from here.
away from all these cynics with minds that close like doors
i want to look for oppurtinity
and build up my immunity to rejection
and be stronger in the future

if the rain could wash away this greed, this storm would be our savior.

[x_Thrice_x]

Wow, I really enjoyed that... it's fucking A+.

[Boring Pop Song]

Wow, I really enjoyed that... it's fucking A+.


thanks so much, really

[cris545]

I might be crazy, but I feel like I'm missing the feeling to it. Maybe its because I'm reading it as if you were speaking to me, instead of reading it as if you were letting yourself go in the words that you're letting me read. Other than that I think you chose a good way to portray how you want to leave society. It's a nice job really, but I think it can be better. Keep at it, I want to see more from you.

[Boring Pop Song]

I might be crazy, but I feel like I'm missing the feeling to it. Maybe its because I'm reading it as if you were speaking to me, instead of reading it as if you were letting yourself go in the words that you're letting me read. Other than that I think you chose a good way to portray how you want to leave society. It's a nice job really, but I think it can be better. Keep at it, I want to see more from you.


thanks a lot

[a speedo model]

wow, i like it alot. the first stanza(verse?) is awesome and i love the last line. good job.

[Boring Pop Song]

sweet