jtresk26
07/17/09, 08:05 PM
It's kind of a sad song, but here it goes. (This isn't a final version either):
You will never leave my mind
No matter how much I want to
It's something I can never leave behind
Never forgetting those beautiful eyes of blue
You take me to a place
Where only you and I exist
Dreaming of you staring into my face
Always ending with a perfect kiss
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
I can see how everybody looks at us
I see it everytime
They think they only see one of us
Like it's all in my mind
Where did you go?
Please I don't want to be left behind
Then everybody will know
What has been going on the whole time
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And Ever
(Bridge)
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
I know the last part gets repetitive with the 2 choruses, but it'll sound different with instruments and stuff. Um, if you want to know what the song is about, well I'll tell you: It's about this guy who likes a girl so much that he makes up that they are in a relationship. Basically he went crazy over a girl. It's not an auto-biographical song, but I thought of how I would be if I was in that situation. If you have any lyrical suggestions, you are free to write what you want. If you have a criticism, I will not stop from writing it, but at least back up your criticism please.
You will never leave my mind
No matter how much I want to
It's something I can never leave behind
Never forgetting those beautiful eyes of blue
You take me to a place
Where only you and I exist
Dreaming of you staring into my face
Always ending with a perfect kiss
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
I can see how everybody looks at us
I see it everytime
They think they only see one of us
Like it's all in my mind
Where did you go?
Please I don't want to be left behind
Then everybody will know
What has been going on the whole time
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And Ever
(Bridge)
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
Run away, she said
Don't let this be in your head
Forever
And ever
I know the last part gets repetitive with the 2 choruses, but it'll sound different with instruments and stuff. Um, if you want to know what the song is about, well I'll tell you: It's about this guy who likes a girl so much that he makes up that they are in a relationship. Basically he went crazy over a girl. It's not an auto-biographical song, but I thought of how I would be if I was in that situation. If you have any lyrical suggestions, you are free to write what you want. If you have a criticism, I will not stop from writing it, but at least back up your criticism please.