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thesafeword
07/20/09, 03:13 PM
I reminisce of a room that I don't seem to remember or know at all
So I ask myself 'where am I?', but I say 'am I bothering you?'
Your face seems slightly familiar, this just feels a little different
And dreaming's not so hard when there aren't consequences

Whether I'm awake or not, is just a detail that I'll shed
Because I am six years old and alone with my Backyard football
Wearing my favorite silk green shorts and grass-stained yellow shirt
Instead of this fucking suit and coat

I struggle to put a name on the smell that I know so well
And it leaves me craving a crisp autumn afternoon, oh what I would do
But now to you, I've gotten used to it
Hate me, for I can't do it myself, forgetting all of the things I loved

Whether I'm awake or not, is just a detail that I'll shed
Because I am six years old and alone with my Backyard football
Wearing the warmest clothes, anticipating the snow
Instead of fucking dealing with my problems

These memories are mine, I try not to think about them in order to preserve what little is left
Yes, these memories are mine, incripted into songs that I had never heard at the time
It just works out that way, when I'm sitting all alone in a room I hardly know, it's just too dark to tell
I see the shadow of your face, through the headphones playing a song, that in a few years I'll probably hate

Whether I'm awake or not, is just a detail that I'll shed
Because I am six years old and alone with my Backyard football
Worrying about whether or not I missed that kickball episode of Rocket Power
Instead of fucking worrying about the future

thespearkid
07/20/09, 06:03 PM
quote me and remind me to comment on this.

The Personist
07/20/09, 08:45 PM
quote me and remind me to comment on this.

Do what he said for me too.

TK
07/20/09, 08:54 PM
this quote me and remind thing has been used way too much, haha.

The Personist
07/20/09, 08:54 PM
this quote me and remind thing has been used way too much, haha.

Works, doesn't it?

TK
07/20/09, 09:06 PM
Works, doesn't it?

ha, maybe for you. When I do it, I always forget even if they do quote me, haha.

The Personist
07/20/09, 09:10 PM
ha, maybe for you. When I do it, I always forget even if they do quote me, haha.

That sounds like a personal problem ;-)

TK
07/20/09, 09:12 PM
That sounds like a personal problem ;-)

You can shove my personal problem up your pretentious prick ass.:-)

And your avatar blows and it blows hard;-)

The Personist
07/20/09, 09:12 PM
You can shove my personal problem up your pretentious prick's ass.:-)

And your avatar blows and it blows hard;-)

YOU TAKE THAT BACK RIGHT NOW. TAKE IT BACK. PETE DOHERTY DOES NOT BLOW.

TK
07/20/09, 09:23 PM
YOU TAKE THAT BACK RIGHT NOW. TAKE IT BACK. PETE DOHERTY DOES NOT BLOW.

I think it's a pretty well known fact he does use blow and blows hard.:-0

The Personist
07/20/09, 09:24 PM
I think it's a pretty well known fact he does use blow and blows hard.:-0

<3

Srsly though Pete Doherty > you

TK
07/20/09, 09:27 PM
<3

Srsly though Pete Doherty > you

I think almost everything pwns me, so that's not saying much, ha.

The Personist
07/20/09, 09:28 PM
I think almost everything pwns me.

I think Pete Doherty is better than a lot of things, though. It's a bad criteria to use when being self-deprecatory.

TK
07/20/09, 09:30 PM
I think Pete Doherty is better than a lot of things, though. It's a bad criteria to use when being self-deprecatory.

Holy crap, I edited that post seconds after I posted it. You're fast, I'll give you that.

Edit: Sorry to the OP for turning this into a short chat.

thesafeword
07/20/09, 09:58 PM
quote me and remind me to comment on this.

Do what he said for me too.
As you wish.

This is the first song I've done in forever, so I'm definitely open to suggestions or whatever.

xidreamofyou32x
07/22/09, 12:55 PM
I really like this

thespearkid
07/22/09, 05:56 PM
I really commend you on avoiding cliches (although a few slipped in, "These memories are mine", for example). I'm still having a little trouble pulling together the image though. This is one of the few instances I've seen where a lack of poetic language doesn't necessarily drag down the piece though so that's good. Sorry if this doesn't make any sense. I'm listening to The Decemberists and having a bit of an experience. o.0

The Personist
07/22/09, 05:59 PM
I really commend you on avoiding cliches (although a few slipped in, "These memories are mine", for example). I'm still having a little trouble pulling together the image though. This is one of the few instances I've seen where a lack of poetic language doesn't necessarily drag down the piece though so that's good. Sorry if this doesn't make any sense. I'm listening to The Decemberists and having a bit of an experience. o.0

as long as it's Hazards of Love, bitch.

thespearkid
07/22/09, 06:04 PM
as long as it's Hazards of Love, bitch.
it was. i'm listening to Aeroplane now though. writing an article on Jeff Mangum.

Ryzenfall
07/22/09, 06:05 PM
Good work, I really like this, and it still has a flow to it, despite it being difficult to grasp the image it is conveying. I loved the Rocket Power reference... it seems very fitting in light of the reminiscent nature of the chorus(?) section and the fact that the reference made me feel reminiscent as well.

I think basically much every usage of "fucking" is unnecessary. There are times when it can work, but it just seems to be some kind of bothersome addendum here.

The Personist
07/22/09, 06:05 PM
it was. i'm listening to Aeroplane now though. writing an article on Jeff Mangum.

I'm not at all inspired to write...ANYTHING. so I'm postponing my blog.