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SLADE775
03/10/06, 04:15 PM
The state of the nation is the state of undress. Everyone half exposed to the sun, dried up and stuck with vampire bones. Once you open a casket that should have stayed nailed shut you know you're in trouble. Night-time kids never know what to say to each other when they collide under a suspicious, heavy moon. On show under the aching spotlight. Lines forgotten, cues missed. Hands, faces and hearts all turned upside down to spill the contents. Not a shade of an 'I'm sorry' in sight. It doesn't feel good on the tongue and it doesn't sound sexy on the air. Sultry, sweet, provocative. Belts serve to cover the join between thinking and doing; Frankenstein couldn't cover the bolts because he didn't have the fashion sense. Maybe we don't either but we've got bigger ideas. Bigger bad ideas. Blowing kisses to traitors and taking bribes from the moonlight operators. Tell them to make it dark forever. Tell them when they focus the spotlight and switch on the early evening microphone to keep them away from me. I'm frightened over what the stars will have me say next. When I see your face from the side I wonder how you ended up on my side of the fence. It makes me want to drink sunlight. Take your time away from mine, bedtime divine. The tone of your voice creeps under the skin and turns all my words into: "you can't follow this through, there's a whole strip of sunlight between me and you"

Congrats!
punkpixie
03/10/06, 04:18 PM
Yay!

I didn't even realize until yesterday that I was even picked. Thank you to anyone that even read it, let alone voted for it.

By the way, I was thinking Slade that maybe we should have a rule where the winner of one week cannot be entered again for the week after. Mix it up a little. What do you think?

PS-What's my prize?
SLADE775
03/10/06, 04:38 PM
Yay!

I didn't even realize until yesterday that I was even picked. Thank you to anyone that even read it, let alone voted for it.

By the way, I was thinking Slade that maybe we should have a rule where the winner of one week cannot be entered again for the week after. Mix it up a little. What do you think?

PS-What's my prize?

Hmmm that might be a good idea....

Your prize is a super-rad shirt....I'll need your address to send it, if you want it.

Good job Ellie.

I know this is small now, but I have a feeling that it will get bigger.
CROMagnon
03/10/06, 05:34 PM
that's good, nice piece of prose poetry
Wheez
03/10/06, 05:41 PM
I voted for it. Congrats.
ArTkY_
03/10/06, 06:44 PM
Congrats Ellie, you deserved it.
Trainsaw
03/10/06, 06:53 PM
congrats.
Anton Djamoos
03/10/06, 07:09 PM
Hmmm that might be a good idea....

Your prize is a super-rad shirt....I'll need your address to send it, if you want it.

Good job Ellie.

I know this is small now, but I have a feeling that it will get bigger.
If this is gonna be fair, you can't limit it to the first four suggestions that come up or else it's gonna be the same people picked over and over again.
Wheez
03/10/06, 07:20 PM
If this is gonna be fair, you can't limit it to the first four suggestions that come up or else it's gonna be the same people picked over and over again.

That's why I say everybody gets one piece in.

Oh yeah, I don't have lots of posts. I don't have a say in things.
de la sympathie
03/10/06, 07:20 PM
Congrats, Ellie. You deserve it. <3
Anton Djamoos
03/10/06, 07:28 PM
That's why I say everybody gets one piece in.

Oh yeah, I don't have lots of posts. I don't have a say in things.
Hahaha no you do not.
cris545
03/10/06, 07:32 PM
congrats ellie :) excellent job
punkpixie
03/11/06, 09:28 AM
If this is gonna be fair, you can't limit it to the first four suggestions that come up or else it's gonna be the same people picked over and over again.

That's why I suggested that the person that wins one week is not allowed to be in it again next week.
punkpixie
03/11/06, 09:29 AM
Hmmm that might be a good idea....

Your prize is a super-rad shirt....I'll need your address to send it, if you want it.

Good job Ellie.

I know this is small now, but I have a feeling that it will get bigger.

I would like it actually.

Except I live in England as you know, will that be a problem?
Anton Djamoos
03/11/06, 11:10 AM
That's why I suggested that the person that wins one week is not allowed to be in it again next week.
That's a good suggestion.
punkpixie
03/11/06, 12:43 PM
I try.
Anton Djamoos
03/11/06, 01:41 PM
I try.
And you succeed.
OveriseFan
03/11/06, 05:30 PM
You suck.
punkpixie
03/12/06, 07:43 AM
You suck.

Me?

I thought you were my friend :'(
OveriseFan
03/12/06, 02:12 PM
JAY KAY!

I still haven't read the whole piece.

Wow...
SLADE775
03/12/06, 05:49 PM
I would like it actually.

Except I live in England as you know, will that be a problem?


Um........no I don't think so.

We'll see........
punkpixie
03/13/06, 03:16 AM
I'll send you a PM with the address.
x_Thrice_x
03/13/06, 06:52 AM
Wow, awesome work there... I like this idea, if anything, it gets people more interested in what's going on in this under-rated forum.
OveriseFan
03/13/06, 12:01 PM
Wow, awesome work there... I like this idea, if anything, it gets people more interested in what's going on in this under-rated forum.

That's because it used to be infested with shit.

Now most stuff is halfway decent.
ArTkY_
03/13/06, 04:10 PM
That's because it used to be infested with shit.

Now most stuff is halfway decent.
Some stuff is amazing though... a la Alex and Ellie.

And we have some good stuff... Slade, you, the occasional Shauna post, Boring Pop Song, a speedo model...
punkpixie
03/14/06, 03:52 AM
Some stuff is amazing though... a la Alex and Ellie.

And we have some good stuff... Slade, you, the occasional Shauna post, Boring Pop Song, a speedo model...

Tariq. Don't forget you.
ArTkY_
03/14/06, 07:19 AM
Tariq. Don't forget you.
My stuff lately has sucked. And by lately I mean my "The Rescue" poem.

ewww.