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SLADE775
03/13/06, 03:10 PM
February


Accomplishment
It's left handed
It's an understatement
What's the price?
Of actual courage
Luster rots in the process

A gust of wind carries through
Taking with it all proof
That we ever discarded our focus
To persue the unnoticed
Radiance becomes clouded

With a spark and a motive
Could we have called upon eachother's wits?
This overhead avalanche
A deep breath of Poison
Just as the light beam towards us

A gust of wind carries through
Taking with it all proof
That we ever discarded our focus
To persue the unnoticed
Radience becomes clouded

This is a perfect example
that nothing is final
that courage isn't vital
A single winter
has stranded us in the center
SLADE775
03/14/06, 07:35 AM
Where is everyone.
ArTkY_
03/14/06, 07:48 AM
Its pretty good. I really liked the chorus and the last stanza.
Fallinlove
03/14/06, 07:55 AM
Slade - I really like this... as do I like other stuff you have written
And no hard feelings from before!

Keep it coming.
xllirikx
03/14/06, 07:57 AM
This is a perfect example
that nothing is final
that courage isn't vital
A single winter
has stranded us in the center


those are good lyrics, real good actually.

the rest are too cliche
SLADE775
03/14/06, 08:09 AM
This is a perfect example
that nothing is final
that courage isn't vital
A single winter
has stranded us in the center


those are good lyrics, real good actually.

the rest are too cliche


HAHAHAHA

Find me some similar lyrics.

Don't be stupid.
SLADE775
03/14/06, 08:11 AM
Slade - I really like this... as do I like other stuff you have written
And no hard feelings from before!

Keep it coming.

Thank you.
SLADE775
03/14/06, 08:12 AM
Its pretty good. I really liked the chorus and the last stanza.

Thanks.
Boring Pop Song
03/14/06, 12:13 PM
This is a perfect example
that nothing is final
that courage isn't vital
A single winter
has stranded us in the center

i like that part a lot. not much else really stood out to me though
jetxblack
03/16/06, 12:05 PM
what a fa.g
SLADE775
03/16/06, 12:52 PM
what a fa.g

:la:
cris545
03/16/06, 03:02 PM
I agree with everything that has been posted. The last stanza and the chorus stand out, the rest lack the same strength. I think I've seen better from you, keep at it.
a speedo model
03/17/06, 06:42 AM
i like it. i felt it was strong the whole way through.