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Ryzenfall
07/23/09, 07:39 PM
Two tick still in a room for three
Drawn lazily in, the easy swayed pavement oxygen
By some six fifty eggshell white
Plastic gyrating device.
Making hardly a sound, what I can’t tell for my mind.
Climbing up past the reception desk
Of sent processing, below my eyes
Is a stench that clashes against the small readings
And peripheral musings at hand.
We in the walls, just a companion and me
So I know the culprit instantly.
And convert my cotton garment as a guard
From the subtle foul unseen.
Ten minutes pass and he steals to leave.
Still breathing between cloth and skin
Until the lingering dead winds haunt away.
But nothing has changed.
And upon investigation
I find my mental discourse led me astray
And the source was hidden
In the dark of my own closet
Seeping out for me to blame anything that looked
A little more guilty.



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a.f.i.a.

The Personist
07/23/09, 08:47 PM
You're a dick but I will read this at some point. Your other one is long as shit, and soooo bad i have to correct like every word. Kidding, of course.

Ryzenfall
07/23/09, 08:53 PM
You're a dick but I will read this at some point. Your other one is long as shit, and soooo bad i have to correct like every word. Kidding, of course.

Ha. Thank you, I shower my appreciation upon you in advance.

If you think that one is long, I have another one that is way more obnoxiously insane. It's almost as long as the dick that I am.

The Personist
07/23/09, 08:54 PM
Ha. Thank you, I shower my appreciation upon you in advance.

If you think that one is long, I have another one that is way more insane. It's almost as long as the dick that I am.

Stop hitting on me.

Ryzenfall
07/23/09, 09:01 PM
Stop hitting on me.

Boom roasted.

/apinternetzlingoz

The Personist
07/23/09, 09:03 PM
/thread