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Chasing Suns
03/15/06, 03:39 PM
Yes, it is short, but if requested, i shall make it longer. Tell me what you think.

Qualifier

Live to fulfill, to fuck, to get something out of it,
many have hoped, and many were crushed,
as to be furious, they havent lived, they just occupied,
leaning, cringing, thinking we see visions,
and we feel emotions like mirages,
non-fictionitive lives are boring,
some may cut to the chase,
life is death, and death, life,
life is the qualifier, and some, oh so many, have failed,
life is the qualifier, and most, oh too many, have never lived.

Chasing Suns
03/15/06, 05:12 PM
Bump?

Slaytus
03/15/06, 06:04 PM
Yes, it is short, but if requested, i shall make it longer. Tell me what you think.

Qualifier

Live to fulfill, to fuck, to get something out of it,
many have hoped, and many were crushed,
as to be furious, they havent lived, they just occupied,
leaning, cringing, thinking we see visions,
and we feel emotions like mirages,
non-fictionitive lives are boring,
some may cut to the chase,
life is death, and death, life,
life is the qualifier, and some, oh so many, have failed,
life is the qualifier, and most, oh too many, have never lived.



bolded lines honestly...were lines i wish i had thought of for my poem. i really like this. i wish it was longer tho.

Chasing Suns
03/15/06, 06:07 PM
bolded lines honestly...were lines i wish i had thought of for my poem. i really like this. i wish it was longer tho.

Haha thanks :).

Chasing Suns
03/16/06, 12:19 PM
Somebody read it gosh.

Chasing Suns
03/19/06, 03:47 PM
Bump.

a speedo model
03/20/06, 09:38 AM
not bad. it is a bit short but it's still good. keep it up.