Bitter; in need of criticism.

[DylanCa]

I just barely made this account and thought I'd get right into it.
All criticism is welcomed.

Bitter

Let me get on my knees
I could use a warm embrace
Let me sigh my sincere plea’s
You can kick the dirt back in my face
This sting doesn’t hurt so bad
Not with the drugs in my hand
They still can’t seem to fulfill my taste
Another hopefuls lungs laid to waste
Im left here in my favorite chair
Too bitter to change the record
I wouldn’t hate this song so much
If you’d at least try to play along

and say you still care,
But I’m left here

But I’m left here, I’m left here
I’m the only one
I’m tired of writing about you in every fucking song
But I’m left here, I’m left here
And I’m feeling bitter about my mess
But I can’t help it
I still love you to death

I’m too bitter to even say your name
but I’m left here and you’ve made it clear that I’m to blame
My name slipping out your mouth
As if you’re trying to get me for yourself
With your finger on the top of my head, give me a spin
I’ll wander away because after I heard I love you
it was I never want you back again.

But I’m left here, I’m left here
I’m the only one
I’m tired of writing about you in every fucking song
But I’m left here, I’m left here
And I’m feeling bitter about my mess
But I can’t help it
I still love you to death

It’s my choice, make me burn
it’s my choice, make me hurt
it’s my choice, make me learn
it’s my choice, please come back

[reesa]

i like the first verse. i could sing to that easily. nice work man (: like even though the concept is cliche i like how you wrote it. lots of angry emotion but thats good.