"Days Before Today"

[afterschoolnj12]

I've been re-working this.. and we'll eventually be adding a melody to it..

Let me know what you guys think..

retrace our youthful steps
so we can start anew
oh, back, when nothing seemed to matter
when were known to few

Time keeps moving forward
and we can't turn back
let's stare to the future
We cannot get off track.

The clockhands signal change
Stars so high above, illuminate our way
Our path, intertwined with fate
Let's move at this gentle speed
So we don't miss a thing.

So stay close,
or take the lead.
The things you say,
they mean so much to me.

And put the freeze frame
on this hallway of time,
I could stay this way forever.
Let's stay this way forever.

The clockhands signal change
Stars so high above, illuminate our way
Our path, intertwined with fate
Let's move at this gentle speed
So we don't miss a thing.

Let's stay this way forever.

[afterschoolnj12]

Bump. and it's a shame more people don't post in this forum. I enjoy reading other people's work as well as posting my own. Whatever, haha.

[a speedo model]

i don't know, it's good but it felt a bid cliche at times. it needs some work. keep working on it.