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tommy's ghost
07/27/09, 08:34 PM
I’ve strayed from the growls
Painted on the ground,
But
Even sheep keep teeth.
I’ve abandoned the musk
That whistles with the wind,
But
Its gale has yet to rescind.
This mortality has become
Much too sordid for some;
Some being me
And the company I keep.

Each flutter of my eyelids
Is an after-thought.
Each blink leaves its shadow
Upon my pupils’ pulpit,
Where life performs
Accordingly to my perception.
The shadows become storm clouds.
Droplets foreshadow the squall.
This mortality has become a caricature
Drawn in the vein of a rodent piloting
A steamboat across a pale surface.
A monochrome monotony
Too real for reality.

SLoT
07/28/09, 10:29 AM
I like this. The first couple lines reminded me of something Mastodon would write. It obviously loses that frame of mind almost immediately after, but I like the flow. I'm taking it as somewhat punchy, but I like that.

tommy's ghost
07/28/09, 12:00 PM
I like this. The first couple lines reminded me of something Mastodon would write. It obviously loses that frame of mind almost immediately after, but I like the flow. I'm taking it as somewhat punchy, but I like that.

Thank you for the kind words. Haha, did it sound like something off Blood Mountain?

SLoT
07/28/09, 12:16 PM
Thank you for the kind words. Haha, did it sound like something off Blood Mountain?
Possibly, it's in my car right now, but I was more gearing towards Blood & Thunder from Leviathan.

tommy's ghost
07/28/09, 12:20 PM
Possibly, it's in my car right now, but I was more gearing towards Blood & Thunder from Leviathan.

Ah, I see. Both are awesomely stellar albums.

SLoT
07/28/09, 12:22 PM
Ah, I see. Both are awesomely stellar albums.
You are correct. That band is incredible, I love the whole vibe I get from them through their artwork too.

tommy's ghost
07/28/09, 12:26 PM
You are correct. That band is incredible, I love the whole vibe I get from them through their artwork too.

Definitely. I absolutely LOVE the artwork on all of the albums. They just ooze heaviness, but with style. And I love how they're able to capture the overall feel of the albums with each of the covers.

SLoT
07/28/09, 12:34 PM
Definitely. I absolutely LOVE the artwork on all of the albums. They just ooze heaviness, but with style. And I love how they're able to capture the overall feel of the albums with each of the covers.
Yeah man, that artist is badass. He paints the covers on like 5 ft by 6 ft canvas.

tommy's ghost
07/28/09, 12:39 PM
Yeah man, that artist is badass. He paints the covers on like 5 ft by 6 ft canvas.

Oh, wow. I would totally hang Leviathan on my bedroom wall.

SLoT
07/28/09, 12:48 PM
Oh, wow. I would totally hang Leviathan on my bedroom wall.
It's huge man. Check out www.myspace.com/workhardened (http://www.myspace.com/workhardened) or www.workhardened.com (http://www.workhardened.com) for the artist, Paul Romano. Looks like a kick ass guy.

tommy's ghost
07/28/09, 12:56 PM
It's huge man. Check out www.myspace.com/workhardened (http://www.myspace.com/workhardened) or www.workhardened.com (http://www.workhardened.com) for the artist, Paul Romano. Looks like a kick ass guy.

Holy crap. Dude's done a truck-load of artwork. Never knew he was so prolific.

SLoT
07/28/09, 01:00 PM
Holy crap. Dude's done a truck-load of artwork. Never knew he was so prolific.
Yeah man, he's incredible.