Hey I'm new, what do you think of this?

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Lyrics to a song I wrote, it has no music yet and needs a little tweaing but I'm looing for some honest opinions, thankyou.
A life without loving
Is empty, hard and cold
But it is safe from disappointment
And completely in control

If I let you love me
If I let you in
Will you stay forever?
Or will you run again?

It hurts to be broken
It hurts more to hide
But barriers protect me
From being ripped apart inside

If I let you love me
If I let you in
Will you stay forever?
Or will you run again?

The way you look at me
Sends shivers down my spine
But fear overrules you
Feeds the emptiness inside

If I let you love me
If I let you in
Will you stay forever?
Or will you run again?
(c) Emma Anderson