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OveriseFan
03/21/06, 04:21 PM
Astronomy meets Theories of Love and Life

And it's just the prettiest of smiles
I don't know where she keeps them all.

Remember every night when you're lying alone,
Trying your hardest just to fall asleep,
That the sky falls down each time you wink,
And the stars always grin although she weeps.

Watch the ink-drawn ballerina
Leap across my pages
I made her I’ll destroy her
A simple flame’s a murderer

The story still progressed though all the characters had died.
Just bring in a new storyline, they won’t know the difference.

Watch the ink-drawn ballerina
Leap across my pages
I made her I’ll destroy her
A simple flame’s a murderer

So do you still ring around the rosies with pockets full of...?
Do you still feel those wonderful butterflies flutter each time you...?

Ad Astra… Ad Astra…
I’ll take you to the stars and back.

Slaytus
03/21/06, 04:46 PM
:Oomg.....

OveriseFan
03/21/06, 04:47 PM
Is that a good OMG or a bad OMG?

OveriseFan
03/21/06, 04:59 PM
Good Or Bad?!

cris545
03/21/06, 09:22 PM
Good Or Bad?!

I call a good omg :)

wyverna
03/22/06, 09:28 AM
I loved these lines:

Watch the ink-drawn ballerina
Leap across my pages
I made her I’ll destroy her
A simple flame’s a murderer

They were really good, and I loved the imagery.

a speedo model
03/22/06, 10:21 AM
it's good.

ArTkY_
03/22/06, 03:29 PM
Liked the chorus and the last line. But those were just so good that I ended up liking the whole thing... but work on that first verse, it doesn't click with me.

SLADE775
03/22/06, 04:14 PM
I don't like this at all James.

But I'm sure you saw that coming.

OveriseFan
03/22/06, 06:22 PM
Haha, I added that chorus last minute too...

Anyway, Slade, I think we'll just need to agree to disagree.

SLADE775
03/23/06, 07:22 AM
Haha, I added that chorus last minute too...

Anyway, Slade, I think we'll just need to agree to disagree.

No cause I like a lot of your stuff.

It's just.....Ballerina?

Jesus Christ dude.

save_me
03/23/06, 07:24 AM
i liked it.

OveriseFan
03/23/06, 11:53 AM
No cause I like a lot of your stuff.

It's just.....Ballerina?

Jesus Christ dude.

Yeah, well sorry I write about love sometimes rather than making up stories about kids dying in a hospital :wink:

Slaytus
03/23/06, 11:55 AM
ya that was a omg good
sorry i was distracted by copying/pasting this in my LJ and claiming it was my work ;)






jk

ArTkY_
03/23/06, 02:21 PM
James, check your PMs.

SLADE775
03/23/06, 02:22 PM
Yeah, well sorry I write about love sometimes rather than making up stories about kids dying in a hospital :wink:

What do you know about love?

hahahahahaha

jeeez

OveriseFan
03/23/06, 02:24 PM
What do you know about love?

hahahahahaha

jeeez

Yes, because age has a whole lot to do with that, right?

I'm not saying people don't go overboard at my age, but hey, I'm feeling passionate right now

SLADE775
03/23/06, 02:46 PM
Yes, because age has a whole lot to do with that, right?

I'm not saying people don't go overboard at my age, but hey, I'm feeling passionate right now

:rolleyes:

OveriseFan
03/24/06, 01:37 PM
:rolleyes:

Dear Slade,

Suck my dick.

Please?

Love,

james